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Do still torment me today.
My soul, to you, I did unfold
And my trust you did betray.

How could you be so very cold
To push my feelings away.
Emotions that I had controlled
Have since turned to disarray.

I revealed my heart for console
My pain was not for display.
In secret my past had been told
And in secret it should stay.

Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2002 Yvonne Denise Springer
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In Secret

Contributed by springchic1979 on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Some memories that I withhold
Do still torment me today.
My soul, to you, I did unfold
And my trust you did betray.

How could you be so very cold
To push my feelings away.
Emotions that I had controlled
Have since turned to disarray.

I revealed my heart for console
My pain was not for display.
In secret my past had been told
And in secret it should stay.

Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2002 Yvonne Denise Springer

Copyright Â© springchic1979 ... [ 2003-06-20 00:05:00]
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Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 02:18:42 AM AEST
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Very nicely written ... I'm sorry this happened, but your words inspire as always ... Jan

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:39:02 AM AEST
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Beautifully written but I am sorry that you had to go through this.

sleepless_siren

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 09:26:41 AM AEST
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So well you put your feelings to words. Wonderful with pain.

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 02:43:37 PM AEST
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awww, im sorry this happened, it seems we always find out who our true friends are when we open up, the real ones are genuine, and are steadfast.... hugs n' love nessa

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:32:13 PM AEST
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Aye Nessa, you are correct, and it hurts when you realize someone you thought was a friend has betrayed you....

However it seems to hurt more when the person who backstabs you is family.

Betrayal (haiku)

Overwhelming pain
Drowns me in a flood of thoughts;
My emotions rage.

Your knife in my back
Puts me at a loss for words.
I bleed silently.

Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2002 Yvonne Denise Springer

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:34:28 PM AEST
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Thank you Jan.
*hugs*

Yvonne

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:35:35 PM AEST
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Thank you sleepless_siren.
*hugs*

Yvonne

Re: In Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:38:55 PM AEST
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Thank you Lovewriter. I find writing about pain the best way for me to get over it. (Though not everything I write about is a personal experience).

Yvonne

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