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Array ( [sid] => 19306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => just so [time] => 2003-06-19 21:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i sit and weep when you arent around,
i alone and weep without a sound.

just so you dont see.

just so you dont know.
exactly how torn i really am ,

so you dont have to worry .
i slip on my smiling mask ,
just so you dont cry .

i pretend i dont want to die ,
just so you are happy i hide my pain, my tears , myself....

so many way to kill myself without killing myself

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just so

Contributed by zeroelysium on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i sit and weep when you arent around,
i alone and weep without a sound.

just so you dont see.

just so you dont know.
exactly how torn i really am ,

so you dont have to worry .
i slip on my smiling mask ,
just so you dont cry .

i pretend i dont want to die ,
just so you are happy i hide my pain, my tears , myself....

so many way to kill myself without killing myself

just so you are happy

Copyright © zeroelysium ... [ 2003-06-19 21:35:00]
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Re: just so (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:15:59 PM AEST
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Oh wow... there's so much real emotion in this. You should never feel you have to pretend to be happy for anyone. I completely understand the need to avoid bringing someone else down with your own unhappiness, but if this person is a true friend, and they found out you'd been faking and not being honest with them about how you've been feeling, they would probably be upset that you felt you couldn't be honest with them. Just make sure you know what's most important.

~ Moonlit

Re: just so (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 03:19:30 AM AEST
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hey kid, this one kindof worried me, e-mail me
Mom

Re: just so (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:00:17 AM AEST
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This is a worrying poem. I hope you are OK. The poetic style is brilliant. It was disturbing to read but I also enjoyed the real emotion in it.

sleepless_siren

Re: just so (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:35:22 PM AEST
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awww! we all feel sad sometimes, your not alone, may the sun shine on you and happiness touch your soul soon, hugs n' love nessa

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