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Array ( [sid] => 19295 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Revenge [time] => 2003-06-19 16:05:00 [hometext] => I shall hunt down the one that cursed me, and kill her myself.

Kane [bodytext] => I'm over it, I've accepted it,
It took a hundred years and a thousand tears,
Death in the motal life, rebrith into night,
Doing little more then sleeping, waking and feeding,

The change was painful, leaving me with a tormented soul,
Lying there paralized, as each organ died one at a time,
Unable to move, open for you to feed on my wound,
Now the tranformation complete, it is you I seek,

Vengences is mine, it's only a matter of time,
You gave me this gift, you stupit freak,
You will die, and I'll face the wrath of my own kind,
I didn't ask for this, why couldn't you keep your eternal kiss,

No love, no heart, a mind of memories a soul torn apart,
Thank you for this pain, making me hide my shame,
Tears fall from anothers eyes, as I tilt the neck back and dine,
The warmth of their blood, is the closest I get to love,

Accepting it was the first step, lonlyness the only thing left,
You gave me this curse, a world of eternal hurt,
You will die, make my words you fithly swine,
Everynight I look, soon you will pay for this life you took.

Heart & Soul
Kane [comments] => 3 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Revenge

Contributed by Kane on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I'm over it, I've accepted it,
It took a hundred years and a thousand tears,
Death in the motal life, rebrith into night,
Doing little more then sleeping, waking and feeding,

The change was painful, leaving me with a tormented soul,
Lying there paralized, as each organ died one at a time,
Unable to move, open for you to feed on my wound,
Now the tranformation complete, it is you I seek,

Vengences is mine, it's only a matter of time,
You gave me this gift, you stupit freak,
You will die, and I'll face the wrath of my own kind,
I didn't ask for this, why couldn't you keep your eternal kiss,

No love, no heart, a mind of memories a soul torn apart,
Thank you for this pain, making me hide my shame,
Tears fall from anothers eyes, as I tilt the neck back and dine,
The warmth of their blood, is the closest I get to love,

Accepting it was the first step, lonlyness the only thing left,
You gave me this curse, a world of eternal hurt,
You will die, make my words you fithly swine,
Everynight I look, soon you will pay for this life you took.

Heart & Soul
Kane




Copyright © Kane ... [ 2003-06-19 16:05:00]
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Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:28:33 PM AEST
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good write
Shari


Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:09:23 PM AEST
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I hope you do find her and kill her. LOL good write.

The Phantom


Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 06:37:49 AM AEST
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Wow! Great work! I love dark poetry.

sleepless_siren




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