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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Gone In 60 Seconds
[time] => 2003-06-19 15:35:00
[hometext] => Writing a poem takes about 10 minutes,
Sex to some last 5 minutes.
When I saw you my heart,
was Gone In 60 Seconds.
The Phantom
[bodytext] => Eyes meet, heart skips a beat,
This is love, heart of ice reduced to flesh and blood,
Beauty beyond Imagination, time stops across the nation,
Lips touch, body turns to mush,
Knees shake, feels like an Earthquake,
Too scared to run, together watching the setting sun,
Emotions running wild, all because of a simple smile,
Three tiny words, I love you, that's absurd,
Control thy self, someone please help,
Holding hands, like two childen playing in the sand,
A yellow rose, gripping my soul,
Heart exploding like a bomb, filled with loves own song,
Summer rain, washing away my pain,
Love in the air, you broke me down, that's not fair,
Mountian's purple haze, you've got me lost in a maze,
Looking for a way out, I'm in love, there's no doubt,
You've got me on edge, a mystery like Stone Henge,
My heart beckons, Gone In 60 Seconds.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
[comments] => 20
[counter] => 263
[topic] => 2
[informant] => The_Phantom
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
)
Gone In 60 Seconds
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eyes meet, heart skips a beat,
This is love, heart of ice reduced to flesh and blood,
Beauty beyond Imagination, time stops across the nation,
Lips touch, body turns to mush,
Knees shake, feels like an Earthquake,
Too scared to run, together watching the setting sun,
Emotions running wild, all because of a simple smile,
Three tiny words, I love you, that's absurd,
Control thy self, someone please help,
Holding hands, like two childen playing in the sand,
A yellow rose, gripping my soul,
Heart exploding like a bomb, filled with loves own song,
Summer rain, washing away my pain,
Love in the air, you broke me down, that's not fair,
Mountian's purple haze, you've got me lost in a maze,
Looking for a way out, I'm in love, there's no doubt,
You've got me on edge, a mystery like Stone Henge,
My heart beckons, Gone In 60 Seconds.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2003-06-19 15:35:00]
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by norm on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:51:15 PM AEST
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I like your poem
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:30:43 PM AEST
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exquisite
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:33:51 PM AEST
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romantic and very beautiful phantom
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:03:27 PM AEST
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Thank you Norm, I havn't had the honor of recieving two many if any comments from you my friend, So thank you for your kind words.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:05:17 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words though I don't know if I've earned them but thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:06:50 PM AEST
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Thank you Michelle, for your kind words, though I don't know if I've earned them, but thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Anglea on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:28:49 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! I like it a lot! You write well! |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 12:15:33 AM AEST
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Thank you Anglea, for your kind words, Though I don't feel I've earned them but thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. Stunning!
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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5 mins???? Are you serious!!! :>)
Enjoyed this very much, Matt...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Saira on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:28:17 PM AEST
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| A lovely write. The second last stanza is especially good! |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:28:27 PM AEST
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Thank you Sleepless, your too kind. I'm glad you liked it.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:30:18 PM AEST
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Well my wife wouldn't agree with that, but thanks Jenni for you friendship, and you kind word. Much Love thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:31:54 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words though I don't know if I've earned them but thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 09:27:12 AM AEST
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| What a nice write here...you have expressed the emotions that one would go through....what can I say.....ok ok...wow..... |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 11:38:08 PM AEST
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Thank you Sexygirl, for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:40:51 PM AEST
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| wow! i cant believe i missed such a beautiful moving poem by you! wow and wow! love is a mystery isnt it, i love your reference to stone hedge, clever, hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 01:27:18 AM AEST
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Thanks Ladyfawn, you a true friend and I'm a big fan of yours. Thanks for the comment, much love.
The Phantom |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:27:11 PM AEST
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| ok well I was blown away in just about 10 seconds..lol...as i read the first stanza..I love it! The whole poem is very tender and is filled with loving devotion..A pleasure to read and thanks for the warm feelings :) |
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Re: Gone In 60 Seconds
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:03:04 AM AEST
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This is very beautifully written. It is truly a work of art. I love it.
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