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Array ( [sid] => 19292 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Just like that ! [time] => 2003-06-19 14:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can take you just like that

and you wouldn稚 even know

may be in your dreams

you might get the slightest hint

which you値l readily dismiss

once you wake up.

I assure you there is no such thing

as mutual consent,

once I have taken you into my world

through the means of my psyche

here my relentless imagination

will make you do as I choose

tease you and striptease you

If that may be the case.

It hardly is so trivial

as titillating myself

at your expense

even in the eye of my mind

I can be gentle in this ruthless

task of taking you

of possessing you.

Be assured you値l have

all the breathing space you want

you値l have total freedom

like you never thought possible

If you ever shed tears

they will be tears of joy

and you値l have them

pouring rampant

throughout my lucid dreams.

The thing is you値l never know

how come my name triggers

the fondest memories in you

how come the distant image

of someone so remote as me

whom you have hardly met

hits such a deep spot in you.

You値l never guess

in your wildest imagination

that just a short poem you wrote

just those few words you scribbled

and just the place you touched

got you into all this double life

the one that you breathe

and the other that I have. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Just like that !

Contributed by vincy on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can take you just like that

and you wouldn稚 even know

may be in your dreams

you might get the slightest hint

which you値l readily dismiss

once you wake up.

I assure you there is no such thing

as mutual consent,

once I have taken you into my world

through the means of my psyche

here my relentless imagination

will make you do as I choose

tease you and striptease you

If that may be the case.

It hardly is so trivial

as titillating myself

at your expense

even in the eye of my mind

I can be gentle in this ruthless

task of taking you

of possessing you.

Be assured you値l have

all the breathing space you want

you値l have total freedom

like you never thought possible

If you ever shed tears

they will be tears of joy

and you値l have them

pouring rampant

throughout my lucid dreams.

The thing is you値l never know

how come my name triggers

the fondest memories in you

how come the distant image

of someone so remote as me

whom you have hardly met

hits such a deep spot in you.

You値l never guess

in your wildest imagination

that just a short poem you wrote

just those few words you scribbled

and just the place you touched

got you into all this double life

the one that you breathe

and the other that I have.




Copyright ツゥ vincy ... [ 2003-06-19 14:35:00]
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Re: Just like that ! (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:57:58 PM AEST
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Your poem is a oner...
----------------------------
Is this a possible virtual place
where the front of the head
may not be the face,
If this be true is your friend in the end
going to have arsinic or finally old lace?




Re: Just like that ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:41:34 PM AEST
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good write although a bit unnerving
Shari


Re: Just like that ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jilly on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST
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Very interesting vincy...don't know wether to congratulate you or feel pitty for him....hee hee.... great write!
~Jilly




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