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Array ( [sid] => 19290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Holding Back [time] => 2003-06-19 13:35:00 [hometext] => Coming to grips with a parental death is not easy when you are so close [bodytext] => When my tears begin to fall
since my mother passed away,
I try to detach myself but
I am backed against the wall.

Those tears turn into a heavy rain -
A never ending flood.
I feel as thought I'm drowning -
Slowly going insane.

As the months roll slowly by
and memories begin to fad,
Ever so slowly I realize that
A piece of my heart has died.

I have to believe that I will see
my mother in another lifetime -
No malls, no shopping no hanging out
A reunion on a higher degree.

That just fine - I'll take it - As long
as it's Mom and me.

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Holding Back

Contributed by joni553 on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When my tears begin to fall
since my mother passed away,
I try to detach myself but
I am backed against the wall.

Those tears turn into a heavy rain -
A never ending flood.
I feel as thought I'm drowning -
Slowly going insane.

As the months roll slowly by
and memories begin to fad,
Ever so slowly I realize that
A piece of my heart has died.

I have to believe that I will see
my mother in another lifetime -
No malls, no shopping no hanging out
A reunion on a higher degree.

That just fine - I'll take it - As long
as it's Mom and me.

Copyright © joni553 ... [ 2003-06-19 13:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Holding Back (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 05:02:06 PM AEST
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This is a tribute
from daughter to mother
it is beautiful just as it is

Re: Holding Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 05:06:00 AM AEST
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I know how difficult this is (I lost my father just over a year ago). Try to be strong. I am sure loads of people have said this to you but it does get easier. It never goes away but it does get easier.

Fantastic poem.

sleepless_siren

Re: Holding Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 02:39:42 PM AEST
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Im SO sorry for the loss of your Mom.
By the way, I like the rhyming scheme you used... 1st and last line rhythm. Neat!
~T

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