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Array ( [sid] => 19286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Don't cry my dear Sun flame! [time] => 2003-06-19 11:35:00 [hometext] => When my soul mate cried like a little babe
this world seemed to be drowned in her tears.
There fore I have to embrace her with a more powerful cry to save this world from a great misery..
an emotional and most sensational love poem.
please read and enjoy!!!
* * * [bodytext] => Never think that you have no place in my heart
Never think that you have never been loved by me
Please don’t cry my dear! Don’t shed your tears
Your tears will create hurricanes in my mind
And volcanoes will burst forth in my heart
Please, know that you’re the pilot of my life boat
And if your eyes are filled with tears of sorrow
My eyes will burst forth with pain of volcanoes
And our life boat will sink into a hell of darkness
Please don’t cry, if your tears fall on the ground
This heart of earth will receive the bolts of thunder
And the green trees of my land will burn down and
My world will turn into a burning ground of ashes
If you appear as a lady of sorrow on my horizon
The Sun of the day will turn into a globe of darkness
Even the full moonshine will shower the black coals
And our lives will end in the endless night of sorrows
Ha, ha my dear, don’t cry and don’t shed your tears
Know that you are my honey fire and my soul mate
You are my lamp of life, and you are my life breath
You’re my goddess of love and my heart’s sun flame
Be happy always, feel the sweetness of my love and
And feel my caressing hands on your rosy cheeks!!!

18-6-2003







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Don't cry my dear Sun flame!

Contributed by venkat on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Never think that you have no place in my heart
Never think that you have never been loved by me
Please don’t cry my dear! Don’t shed your tears
Your tears will create hurricanes in my mind
And volcanoes will burst forth in my heart
Please, know that you’re the pilot of my life boat
And if your eyes are filled with tears of sorrow
My eyes will burst forth with pain of volcanoes
And our life boat will sink into a hell of darkness
Please don’t cry, if your tears fall on the ground
This heart of earth will receive the bolts of thunder
And the green trees of my land will burn down and
My world will turn into a burning ground of ashes
If you appear as a lady of sorrow on my horizon
The Sun of the day will turn into a globe of darkness
Even the full moonshine will shower the black coals
And our lives will end in the endless night of sorrows
Ha, ha my dear, don’t cry and don’t shed your tears
Know that you are my honey fire and my soul mate
You are my lamp of life, and you are my life breath
You’re my goddess of love and my heart’s sun flame
Be happy always, feel the sweetness of my love and
And feel my caressing hands on your rosy cheeks!!!

18-6-2003











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Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:39:20 PM AEST
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this is exquiste and very different from what you usually write dear venkat:) i lovvvee it!!! hugs n' love nessa


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:54:18 PM AEST
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very enjoyable
Shari


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:42:27 PM AEST
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lovely write Venkat
michelle


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jarmen_Kell on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:17:52 AM AEST
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Whoooof.
It struck me so hard, there are "hurricanes in my mind", "volcanoes burst forth in my heart", this "heart of earth" is "electrified", the "green trees of my land" are burning down and
my world is a burning ground of ashes. In short, it's a great write. Keep it up good friend!


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:42:07 AM AEST
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It paints a beautiful picture with such wonderful emotion. I really enjoyed the write.


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:46:25 AM AEST
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Very heart touching and superbly written!


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 08:51:34 AM AEST
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Heartfelt and vivid write ... how could anyone cry with your love to nurture them like this ... Jan


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:23:16 AM AEST
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You are correct my friend..she is happy..but as a poet I was tempted to write a poem to satisfy my heart.. thank you..venkat


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:24:09 AM AEST
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Only Einherjar can comment like this..I think you have donned a new robe.. venkat


Re: Don't cry my dear Sun flame! (User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 02:19:50 PM AEST
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beautifully written




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