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[sid] => 1928
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Pillow Talk
[time] => 2002-08-07 20:13:59
[hometext] => An ethereal bit set in the perspective that the persona has his eyes closed during the whole poem, creating a bit of a surreal effect. Unusual as it is for my works, this one doesn't present any sort of issue to be pondered or anything to dusgust the reader. This is a simple, pleasant conversation between two new lovers, though the typical moral that all of my works carry is still there.
[bodytext] => okay
im ready i think i think im ready to trust you come here my eyes are closed so don’t hurt me put the knife away i can see it behind your back my eyes are closed im ready i trust you can you be trusted can i trust you i think i do so i must oh thats nice you have soft skin and a warm body what is that being dripped on my forehead it smells sweet my eyes are closed that liquid is sealing in my tears it feels like its hardening i cant open my eyes i cant see i cant trust you youve robbed me it smells sweet i cant smell anymore i cant breathe it sure is dark in here are you even in the room my legs theyre stuck arms too i cant move it feels nice and warm im sweating im scared im trapped im trapped oh wait what is that its all gone now what happened are you there im here i thought youd left me why would you ever think that what did you pour on me are your eyes closed yes nothing nothing do you trust me yes do you i told you already that i trust you okay then do you love me whats that whats what love i dont know well neither do i do you love me anyways i suppose alright so i get your love and your trust and what do you get i get to be buried with you in my arms just as i get to lie with you every night and feel your soft skin okay good lady yes what did you pour on me i didnt pour anything on you thats odd i thought you had you were dreaming probably was i suppose goodnight goodnight [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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