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Array ( [sid] => 19260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wheres the sun????? [time] => 2003-06-18 23:35:00 [hometext] => Looking for the sun,since here in Ohio it does nothing but rain anymore! [bodytext] => Rain in my eyes,rain on my face,
Rain is everywhere,
In this soggy wet place,
When will this rain stop,
pouring on my heart,
Its killing all the farmers crop,
its giving my days a bad start,
Every day I look for the sun,
but rain clouds appear,
not today there will be no fun,
as the people start to disapear,
wheres the sun,& the summer play,
we so longed for,
we wait till the end of the day,
but then it starts to pour,
No sand castles or riding bikes,
for the thunder is what I hear,
no volley ball or long nature hikes,
just put away that swimming gear,
For this rain puts a damper on things,
I cant take much more,
the kids cant even use the swings,
just looking out the door,
Wheres the sun,
Does any one know,
I need some fun,
before I see the snow! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 27 [informant] => lowman613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Wheres the sun?????

Contributed by lowman613 on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Rain in my eyes,rain on my face,
Rain is everywhere,
In this soggy wet place,
When will this rain stop,
pouring on my heart,
Its killing all the farmers crop,
its giving my days a bad start,
Every day I look for the sun,
but rain clouds appear,
not today there will be no fun,
as the people start to disapear,
wheres the sun,& the summer play,
we so longed for,
we wait till the end of the day,
but then it starts to pour,
No sand castles or riding bikes,
for the thunder is what I hear,
no volley ball or long nature hikes,
just put away that swimming gear,
For this rain puts a damper on things,
I cant take much more,
the kids cant even use the swings,
just looking out the door,
Wheres the sun,
Does any one know,
I need some fun,
before I see the snow!

Copyright © lowman613 ... [ 2003-06-18 23:35:00]
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Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:23:15 AM AEST
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*smile* Lovely write, Christina..hope the sun shows its face soon...
ugs
Jenni

Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by kels497 on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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cute..hehe

Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:56:40 AM AEST
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awww christina! you can have all the sun here, i love rain and the sound on the roof, would prefer it to sun any day, your poem is so full of feeling i wish i could send sunshine off to you by the bunches!! tell your rain to go south and ill tell the sun move north lol, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:20:29 AM AEST
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At your place the rain is killing the farmers crop...At my place the monsoon rains are still very weak...giving no hopes to farmers..
Thanks Christina for sharing this..this is a vivid and beautiful poem on nature.. venkat

Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:12:04 AM AEST
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I'm sorry Lowman, I know in Korea the monsoon is just getting started. Well nice write, hope the sun shines soon for you.

The Phantom

Re: Wheres the sun????? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:33:05 AM AEST
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Christina we do get a monsoon season here in the desert but there isn't a bit of rain, Im missing the rain. its blue sky sunshine blowing dirt and sand dirt devils and HEAT triple digets everyday here. We spent the afternoon in the pool to make it more pleasant yeaterday. So I have an idea lets trade, Ill give you a week of this dry heat for a week of that cool pouring rain and thunder..
Michelle

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