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Array ( [sid] => 19220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => World of a Writer [time] => 2003-06-18 09:35:00 [hometext] => Hey, my dad told me he would pay me 5 bucks if i wrote a happy poem, lol, b/c pretty much all mine are depressing so i thought on it and this is what came out. [bodytext] => I see a beautiful white stone palace
In every house I see
I can see the whole secret of creation
In one fallen green leaf.
I can look into a bright sunset
And even though it occurs every day
I can always find new bright colors
Something’s always more beautiful than yesterday.
I walk through an ordinary forest,
but see more kingdoms than what exists in all the earth’s past
I can feel creation everywhere
Like when God created the sky so blue, and the ocean so vast.
I look at a bookshelf, a table, maybe a chair
And can see a red wood forest proud and tall
I see the tree with light shining through it’s leaves
And could write a book from it’s birth until it’s fall.
I smile and spin and jump and laugh
As colored sparks and magic fall like a beauty shower
This world is full of the unknown, with limitless freedom
Welcome to the world of a writer.
Full of light and darkness blended to perfection
The beauty of a sunset, sunrise, and the stars in the sky
All mixed together in an eternally changing
World of eternity passing every one else by.
So don’t let earthly limits limit you
Look beyond every surface, beyond the sky.
Don’t let this beauty get away.
For without limits, you can fly.
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World of a Writer

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I see a beautiful white stone palace
In every house I see
I can see the whole secret of creation
In one fallen green leaf.
I can look into a bright sunset
And even though it occurs every day
I can always find new bright colors
Something’s always more beautiful than yesterday.
I walk through an ordinary forest,
but see more kingdoms than what exists in all the earth’s past
I can feel creation everywhere
Like when God created the sky so blue, and the ocean so vast.
I look at a bookshelf, a table, maybe a chair
And can see a red wood forest proud and tall
I see the tree with light shining through it’s leaves
And could write a book from it’s birth until it’s fall.
I smile and spin and jump and laugh
As colored sparks and magic fall like a beauty shower
This world is full of the unknown, with limitless freedom
Welcome to the world of a writer.
Full of light and darkness blended to perfection
The beauty of a sunset, sunrise, and the stars in the sky
All mixed together in an eternally changing
World of eternity passing every one else by.
So don’t let earthly limits limit you
Look beyond every surface, beyond the sky.
Don’t let this beauty get away.
For without limits, you can fly.




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Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 10:04:46 AM AEST
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Your 'Happy' poem is great
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your dad is wise as most dads are
Bless both you guys..you should go far.
Collect the fin


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by Wellington on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:18:08 AM AEST
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I think it's very nice- not my style of poetry at all. but you seem to know how to handle lighter poems, and I really like it. Good luck


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 01:11:35 PM AEST
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worth more than $5 very good write
Shari


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by Dazzle on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 07:30:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful describtion, something I lack. I love it!


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by UnleashedFuture on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 08:31:31 PM AEST
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"A world seen through different eyes..."...that was something I had written some time ago. But it's true and you say it so well. I don't know for you but it can be a curse in some instances because the rational to us isn't reflected in the way everyone else views things. I'm impressed.


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST
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this is awesome. you painted such a vivid picture here and I can see it with you. wonderful.
If you ever need inspiration from a sunset come here for a visit they are beautiful!!
Michelle


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by MX on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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worth way more then $5...
awesome.

-MX-


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:17:38 AM AEST
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Hey Blackfire...you should get at least a $50. for this..it is awesome... the imagery is stunning... you should keep writing happy poems.... you may strike it rich!!!
Jenni


Re: World of a Writer (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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i'm not suprised in the least...this was beautiful...i'm still working on mine...hmmm...after i get my five dollars we'll go to the book store together! :) keep it up sis.

Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~




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