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Trapped within my Hell

Come on in this prison
Known as my home
Where you can find me
Hidden alone,
Deep inside this skin of broken bone.
Watch out for the black painted walls
Smeared with lies and dark sins,
Covering all what once did shine
Where dreams and happiness formerly grew,
Now they will influence everything you do.
Walk down theses cold halls,
Plug your ears from the screams,
Admire the plastered photographs
Of all the memories that chill and rot,
Don’t stare to long- they're better left forgot.
Watch your step
For the stairs they are steep,
Don’t mind the thick blood
That slurs from the floors,
Shed from all the defeated wars.
When night falls,
As it always does,
Stay locked within your head,
For the monster, never does sleep
And he couldn’t care less how hard you weep.
You’ve entered my hell,
And now you’re forced to stay,
Don’t worry the pain it will numb
Once you're completely sucked in,
Don’t try to escape, take it from me, there is no way you can ever win.
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Trapped within my hell

Contributed by mystical_illusion on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

meh, i hope this makes sense, i dunno it seems that all the stuff i do post doesnt flow well.... all comments welcomed.

Trapped within my Hell

Come on in this prison
Known as my home
Where you can find me
Hidden alone,
Deep inside this skin of broken bone.
Watch out for the black painted walls
Smeared with lies and dark sins,
Covering all what once did shine
Where dreams and happiness formerly grew,
Now they will influence everything you do.
Walk down theses cold halls,
Plug your ears from the screams,
Admire the plastered photographs
Of all the memories that chill and rot,
Don’t stare to long- they're better left forgot.
Watch your step
For the stairs they are steep,
Don’t mind the thick blood
That slurs from the floors,
Shed from all the defeated wars.
When night falls,
As it always does,
Stay locked within your head,
For the monster, never does sleep
And he couldn’t care less how hard you weep.
You’ve entered my hell,
And now you’re forced to stay,
Don’t worry the pain it will numb
Once you're completely sucked in,
Don’t try to escape, take it from me, there is no way you can ever win.

Copyright Â© mystical_illusion ... [ 2003-06-17 05:05:00]
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Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 07:37:57 AM AEST
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Very well written...stay locked "with in your head"..keep them coming on.. venkat

Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:36:19 AM AEST
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Fear pain and realisim within your words, very nicely done.
Keep it up.

Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:51:33 PM AEST
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Hey, Kelly very good I loved the imagery and the dark description. you should post more of yer stuff or e-mail them to me and for the record this flowed very well.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:49:05 PM AEST
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I tiptoed through the hall into your hell
had a brush with the monster, lost my wits
now that I've swallowed my tongue in the pits
after stumbling and rolling down the stairs,
what's the point of giving me all them weird stares?.

Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:53:08 PM AEST
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This is a great write and very well expressed. Keep them coming!
Saira

Re: Trapped within my hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Coquillion on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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I don't see why you worry. This an excellent poem

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