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Array ( [sid] => 19132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Chance [time] => 2003-06-16 19:05:00 [hometext] => Like all my other poems, this one is pretty old, but have you ever wanted someone you just couldn't have? [bodytext] => I want my chance with her love
To show her how I feel
I wanna open up this heart of mine
So she can see I’m real

I want my chance with her love
To hold her by the fires light
I wanna look into her eyes
And see them sparkle bright

I want my chance with her love
To gently hold her hand
While walking side by side
Next to the ocean's endless sand

I want my chance with her love
To run my fingers through her hair
I wanna hold her close to me
So she'll know I'm always there

I want my chance with her love
I wanna be where she is
I want my chance with her love
But unfortunately... she is his.
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My Chance

Contributed by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I want my chance with her love
To show her how I feel
I wanna open up this heart of mine
So she can see I’m real

I want my chance with her love
To hold her by the fires light
I wanna look into her eyes
And see them sparkle bright

I want my chance with her love
To gently hold her hand
While walking side by side
Next to the ocean's endless sand

I want my chance with her love
To run my fingers through her hair
I wanna hold her close to me
So she'll know I'm always there

I want my chance with her love
I wanna be where she is
I want my chance with her love
But unfortunately... she is his.

Copyright Â© Goebelclm73 ... [ 2003-06-16 19:05:00]
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Re: My Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by starshine on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:50:44 PM AEST
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HI- Your poem is certainly for either sex. No matter how old your poetry is- events such as you describe never change from year to year.
Heartwarming!
Starshine

Re: My Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:12:17 PM AEST
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true, this seems to be an age old problem, good write
Shari

Re: My Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:20:40 PM AEST
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Starshine,
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!
Christopher

Re: My Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:36:30 PM AEST
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Shari,
I certainly agree with you! I have always had this problem though. I'm a bit shy in my older age, not like I was in my early 20's, gets harder as you get older I think, maybe it's just me. Thank you for the comment!
Christopher

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