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Array ( [sid] => 19112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Never again boy [time] => 2003-06-16 09:35:00 [hometext] => This once for you *****
you should never had played me
cause boy......just you wait and see [bodytext] => You charmed me, you harmed me
seduced me, you used me
I loved you, but you where just in to getting through
I thought you where different,
but you where worse then i ever knew

You where so sweet, then you become
this horrible monster and scratch my cheek
I never felt that kind of heat
At first it was all so good between the sheet
Oh boy, was i freaked

how foolish could i be,
to let you in to my heart
and then you just grab a hold
and wrapped it all apart

I'll never trust again
you where the last to play this game
Boy.....You should be ashamed
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MissMichelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Never again boy

Contributed by MissMichelle on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You charmed me, you harmed me
seduced me, you used me
I loved you, but you where just in to getting through
I thought you where different,
but you where worse then i ever knew

You where so sweet, then you become
this horrible monster and scratch my cheek
I never felt that kind of heat
At first it was all so good between the sheet
Oh boy, was i freaked

how foolish could i be,
to let you in to my heart
and then you just grab a hold
and wrapped it all apart

I'll never trust again
you where the last to play this game
Boy.....You should be ashamed

Copyright © MissMichelle ... [ 2003-06-16 09:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Never again boy (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 10:16:58 AM AEST
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your poem is a great warning...but

somewhere in this world is a wonderful guy
you may find him if you continue to try

Re: Never again boy (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:14:50 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh this is excellent stuff!! Eerie, morbid, sad, bitter, a little bit of fear thrown in there mixed with pleasure... what a thoroughly outstanding write!

~ Moonlit

Re: Never again boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 10:07:20 PM AEST
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Miss Michelle-
I couldn't agree more with Moonlit on this poem!! Fantastic write!!! But...I'll disagree with Norm and say this...don't "try" and find love, in time it will find you, when you least expect it to!!
Keep writing!!
Christopher

Re: Never again boy (User Rating: 1 )
by arakrune on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:46:49 PM AEST
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this incredibly well writen
but i must agree with the other comments
and dont look for love it will come to you when it is time
to quote somthing i wrote long ago
"those that search most diligently for love are the least likely to find it"
-arakrune-

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