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* * * [bodytext] => In the endless void of darkness
As the skeleton of universe burning
On the pyre of the consciousness
The tongues of dark flames leapt
To consume the lights of space
As the black goddess of fiery tongue
Started her dance to end this creation
On the burning ground of the infinite
I have shouted my last cry and
The merciless Kaika raised her sword
Then placed her foot on my burning pyre
And broke my skeleton, and my skull
Leapt up as she caught me in her palm
And crushed my skull in her silent fist
As I hushed into infinite happiness
And turned into liquid of joy of gold
She flashed her tongue and tasted my
Flames and licked my soul’s essence
As she smeared me to her swaying breasts
Then I was no more in my cosmic dream
And this is the ending of my creation
And this is the end of my death program
As I am now breathing in her womb
Like a golden dreaming embryo to sprout
A new creation and to come out again!!!!

14-6-2003

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Death Program

Contributed by venkat on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In the endless void of darkness
As the skeleton of universe burning
On the pyre of the consciousness
The tongues of dark flames leapt
To consume the lights of space
As the black goddess of fiery tongue
Started her dance to end this creation
On the burning ground of the infinite
I have shouted my last cry and
The merciless Kaika raised her sword
Then placed her foot on my burning pyre
And broke my skeleton, and my skull
Leapt up as she caught me in her palm
And crushed my skull in her silent fist
As I hushed into infinite happiness
And turned into liquid of joy of gold
She flashed her tongue and tasted my
Flames and licked my soul’s essence
As she smeared me to her swaying breasts
Then I was no more in my cosmic dream
And this is the ending of my creation
And this is the end of my death program
As I am now breathing in her womb
Like a golden dreaming embryo to sprout
A new creation and to come out again!!!!

14-6-2003

Copyright Â© venkat ... [ 2003-06-15 18:05:00]
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Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 07:19:04 PM AEST
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Wow Venkat what an intense write. bravo my friend bravo.
michelle

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 10:51:07 PM AEST
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I don't know what to say ... dramatic, spectacular ... I am astounded by this poem ... Jan

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 05:09:27 AM AEST
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incredible piece of art and thought..wows me

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:59:06 AM AEST
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I am in complete awww. This poem was amazing. I read it 3 times before I commented because I love the way your imagination works when it comes to your writings. It has the colors of magic storm.
Great job.

Sandra

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 11:57:37 PM AEST
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Fascinating piece of work, Venkat!!
Jenni

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:52:03 AM AEST
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well done, makes quite a bit of sense..... reincarnation at its finest from my viewpoint, love the images:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Death Program (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 08:31:58 AM AEST
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this poem blew me away - I am stunned and in awe of the rich tapestry of your beliefs - beautifully written - now I will have to go look up Kaika and learn more

merry

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