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An evenings assumption
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A breathless desire
of darkest endeavor
To beckon of love
and then wait forever
To reach but not grasp
at loves fleeting traces
To be standing outside
of ones sweet embraces
Left to lie bleeding
in wanton unrest
Enduring the yearning
of hearts put to test
Seeking that which
is yet not around
To look and not see
that any is found
Humble heart calling
and still is not heard
Souls thoughts of comfort
from cares gift in word
Forever in search
of dreams now long faded
Of a time that I know
when love was not jaded
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wordsy
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2003-06-15 17:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: An evenings assumption
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST (User
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great
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Re: An evenings assumption
(User Rating: 1 ) by garyh on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:58:00 AM AEST (User
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its good... i don't like it when people don't break up their work into stanzas... but it is all in writing style i guess.. so i can't hold you against that :D
so good work |
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