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someone special
Contributed by
plous
on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i met a girl,
so nice,
so warm,
in a world so cold,
it was hard to behold,
who she was,
and it still is,
but i do love that i found you,
my days are bright,
as along with the night,
i sit and talk,
and time goes by,
time i enjoy spending,
this must be a dream,
one i hope is never ending,
because its rare,
like a diamond in the rough,
and it is tough,
not to say i love,
but i try to be strong,
not to hurt and bother,
but is so tough,
it ends in failure,
she is someone i would protect,
as much as i am able,
as i try to talk and be stable,
its mean to me,
that she is so far away,
somewhere i cannot reach,
not yet, not this day,
but someday i will,
and it will be great,
something to remember,
this i will not forsake,
when i am apart i miss you,
when we talk i miss you,
i miss you when i sleep,
when i get back,
from my days in the sand,
i will have such joy,
that i can talk with you again,
becca is my friend,
becca is love,
my becca,
i hold you so dear,
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plous
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:40:11 PM AEST (User
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very good write
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:17:03 PM AEST (User
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Hey Chris...
This was....well beautiful, thank you.
I am honored to be the object of your desire...keep writing, keep breathing and we will all be happy |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:25:27 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem to a beautiful young woman...I know this has touched her heart because it touched mine. Well done! Larry |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:37:42 PM AEST (User
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awww!! this is so sweet chris!! simply beautiful!! hugs and big love to you both!! nessa |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:50:39 PM AEST (User
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Awww beautiful write Chris... (if I may call you that).... I can relate |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 05:19:49 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful write..I'm sure she is reading it over and over..probably memorised it by now...:>)
Jenni |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 12:01:56 AM AEST (User
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What a great write,she will sure & love! Christina |
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 08:59:09 PM AEST (User
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She must be beaming ear to ear :-D It's a lovely write!
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Re: someone special
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 03:57:42 AM AEST (User
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beautiful... blessings... |
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