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Array ( [sid] => 19062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Advice [time] => 2003-06-15 11:05:00 [hometext] => ~
Love is wonderful
When it's strong everyday
But when it goes
What then do I say ?

I have pondered this
Once or twice
And so I thought friend
I'd share my advice
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => Advice

To any who would travel here
In search of my heart
Smiles it’s too late friend
I must depart

But if you’re of a mind
If you’re willing to heed advice
Take time to read this poem
A couple minutes will suffice

If one day love should grace your heart
Turn your world inside out
Grasp it with all your might
Pursue it without doubt

For love is a majestic thing
Wonderful to behold
But also can be fleeting
Perhaps not long yours to hold

So when it touches you
Grab hold and let your spirit fly
Allow your heart to touch the fire
Don’t over think or reason why

And when the day comes
Love has gone away
After the tears have all fallen
Smile and say

“ We explored the heights of heaven “
“ With happy and joyful hearts “
“ Discovered loneliness has an end “
“And love never departs “ !

Russ
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Advice

Contributed by Lone_er on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Advice

To any who would travel here
In search of my heart
Smiles it’s too late friend
I must depart

But if you’re of a mind
If you’re willing to heed advice
Take time to read this poem
A couple minutes will suffice

If one day love should grace your heart
Turn your world inside out
Grasp it with all your might
Pursue it without doubt

For love is a majestic thing
Wonderful to behold
But also can be fleeting
Perhaps not long yours to hold

So when it touches you
Grab hold and let your spirit fly
Allow your heart to touch the fire
Don’t over think or reason why

And when the day comes
Love has gone away
After the tears have all fallen
Smile and say

“ We explored the heights of heaven “
“ With happy and joyful hearts “
“ Discovered loneliness has an end “
“And love never departs “ !

Russ




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Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:52:07 AM AEST
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" Don’t over think or reason why "
this line says it all, the mind and the heart
seldom occupy the same space.


Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:06:23 PM AEST
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Russ..another awesme write; one with which I agree.. I believe it is better to have loved and lost to never have known a love at all.. after all, love is what keeps me alive...
Hugs,
Jenni


Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:48:58 PM AEST
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another wonderful and meaningful write
Shari


Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:02:54 PM AEST
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Russ your poetry is beautiful. You move me with your words. Lovely.
Michelle


Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 12:03:55 AM AEST
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Advice well said here in this write! Russ your work always gets to me! Great work!Christina




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