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Array ( [sid] => 19049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Losing Alice [time] => 2003-06-15 04:35:00 [hometext] => a rough edit of a to be completed song
the parentheses represent words that might be used [bodytext] => Following those (tiny) prints
Giving chase to the one with ears
Alice lost herself in wonderland
Looking for some truth
To a world full of deceit (lies)

Chorus
No point in asking questions
You’ve got to go find
The answers on your own
(And get lost in wonderland)
fall a little to figure out
how to walk through
this wavering world

Looking for answers from that
Jester cat, only led to more questions
Giving merely condescending answers
Transcending lies way beyond truth

Waking up from wonderland
Find your nightmare in reality
And dreams lost in fantasies
Losing hope of ever seeing
Days with clear answers
Leaving behind cloudy questions
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Losing Alice

Contributed by Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Following those (tiny) prints
Giving chase to the one with ears
Alice lost herself in wonderland
Looking for some truth
To a world full of deceit (lies)

Chorus
No point in asking questions
You’ve got to go find
The answers on your own
(And get lost in wonderland)
fall a little to figure out
how to walk through
this wavering world

Looking for answers from that
Jester cat, only led to more questions
Giving merely condescending answers
Transcending lies way beyond truth

Waking up from wonderland
Find your nightmare in reality
And dreams lost in fantasies
Losing hope of ever seeing
Days with clear answers
Leaving behind cloudy questions

Copyright Â© Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow ... [ 2003-06-15 04:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Losing Alice (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 05:59:11 AM AEST
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good write like the Chesire cat it left a smile on my face, enjoyable and true to life....
Shari

Re: Losing Alice (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:48:12 PM AEST
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Sounds good to me.....best of luck with song..
Jenni

Re: Losing Alice (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 03:09:54 AM AEST
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wow!! great song...i like it both ways....you have so many different styles...very talented song writer...keep it up, friend...
kara

Re: Losing Alice (User Rating: 1 )
by Rockalife66 on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 02:04:12 PM AEST
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Wow that was awesome. Keep it up, it might be a million dollar song one day hehe.
Sincerely,
Kayla

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