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Array ( [sid] => 19042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Let Me Be [time] => 2003-06-15 01:05:00 [hometext] => Yeah, I was a little bitter when I wrote this. It's not all that good, but I just had to get out what I was feeling. And that's the whole point of writing poetry, right?... [bodytext] => So you miss your man
'Cause he wasn't around yesterday
So I miss my man
'Cause he hasn't been around for weeks
So you're a little sad
'Cause your man's not answering his phone
So I'm a little sad
'Cause my man doesn't have a phone I can call him on
So you're a little uptight
'Cause your man's too busy to relieve your stress today
So I'm a little uptight
'Cause my man's too far away to relieve mine at all
So you're a little annoyed
'Cause your man's late to pick you up
So I'm a little annoyed
'Cause my man can't even come to see me
You're so in love
That you simply can't be away for a few days
I'm falling in love
So I'm getting a little sick of it after a few weeks
You're so lonely
'Cause you won't see him till tomorrow
I'm so lonely
'Cause god knows when I'll see him again
But hey, I should be happy, right?
I should stop complaining and smile, right?
Well maybe you should be happy with your life
And let me be unhappy with mine [comments] => 8 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Let Me Be

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

So you miss your man
'Cause he wasn't around yesterday
So I miss my man
'Cause he hasn't been around for weeks
So you're a little sad
'Cause your man's not answering his phone
So I'm a little sad
'Cause my man doesn't have a phone I can call him on
So you're a little uptight
'Cause your man's too busy to relieve your stress today
So I'm a little uptight
'Cause my man's too far away to relieve mine at all
So you're a little annoyed
'Cause your man's late to pick you up
So I'm a little annoyed
'Cause my man can't even come to see me
You're so in love
That you simply can't be away for a few days
I'm falling in love
So I'm getting a little sick of it after a few weeks
You're so lonely
'Cause you won't see him till tomorrow
I'm so lonely
'Cause god knows when I'll see him again
But hey, I should be happy, right?
I should stop complaining and smile, right?
Well maybe you should be happy with your life
And let me be unhappy with mine

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-06-15 01:05:00]
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Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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This is a great write. So full of energy!! I feel this way at times also. I hope that you see your honey soon!!
Michelle

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:49:39 AM AEST
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Awww Moonlit...I can feel your loneliness in this poem... Hope you don't have too long a wait...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by psychopoet on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:11:52 AM AEST
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Don't you read it as rap song? I do, and it sounds good!

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:16:19 AM AEST
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good write, nice venting, I hope everything works out for you soon
Shari

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:33:09 AM AEST
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long distance is probably one of the hardest things anyone can endure. if you get through it and still have a strong relationship, you know its truely love. i like the form to this write and the energy behind it. i wish that you can be with the one you love soon :) Kate x

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by savannah on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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This poem describes exactly how I've been feeling! My best friend is upset because she hasn't seen her boyfriend in two week and won't see him again until the 24th. I haven't seen my boyfriend in a month and I won't see him again until September! Thanks for expressing exactly what I feel in such a great poem!

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 02:37:19 AM AEST
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I agree with tease_whizz
-> "long distance is probably one of the hardest things anyone can endure. if you get through it and still have a strong relationship, you know its truely love. "

And that's how I know yours is true love. In my relationship I know I love him, but I don't know if he loves me. In your relationship I know you love him, and I know he loves you. You both long to see each other, be in each others arms. I can see your need reverberating off of each of you. I don't have a need, just a want. We all have our selfish sides, and mine is just showing at this particular time. So sue me. : P... You're not unhappy with your life. You're just unhappy that you're not with Dean. Totally understandable, but now you're with him. And hey, it's not like you weren't in my shoes, bickering at one time. We all do it. It's a human action, right?

Always,
Emmie

Re: Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 05:18:25 AM AEST
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i like this and it sounds like me

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