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Array ( [sid] => 19023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Boundaries [time] => 2003-06-14 16:45:00 [hometext] => This is a hard poem for me to pick a topic for... like all my poems recently... Anyone else see a pattern recently?? it's... about change, really.... [bodytext] => I'm changing again,
And what for?
My spirit is restless,
I want more.

The boundaries that were set,
Are just too small.
So I'm jumping in head first,
I'll take this fall.

It's a scary decision,
It changes my whole life.
But I'm tired of being an outcast,
Tired of heartache and strife.

The boundaries that they set,
I have outgrown.
I'm taking your offered hand,
I like what you've shown.

But I need you to understand,
I am not doing this for you.
I am doing this because it's time
To move on to something I believe too.

The boundaries I had set,
Was just a front built tall.
With a high head I stare,
As we break down that wall. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 43 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Boundaries

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'm changing again,
And what for?
My spirit is restless,
I want more.

The boundaries that were set,
Are just too small.
So I'm jumping in head first,
I'll take this fall.

It's a scary decision,
It changes my whole life.
But I'm tired of being an outcast,
Tired of heartache and strife.

The boundaries that they set,
I have outgrown.
I'm taking your offered hand,
I like what you've shown.

But I need you to understand,
I am not doing this for you.
I am doing this because it's time
To move on to something I believe too.

The boundaries I had set,
Was just a front built tall.
With a high head I stare,
As we break down that wall.

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2003-06-14 16:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Boundaries (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 05:39:01 PM AEST
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What a sweet poem that shows just how
one grows and grows a little, now
a little more as time goes by,
until it's time for us to fly.

Re: Boundaries (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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absolutely breathtaking,, this touched my heart for some reason
Shari

Re: Boundaries (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:16:12 PM AEST
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You probably know that I used to be terrified of change. But now I know it can be a really good, really healty thing. I applaud you and say great poem! Sometimes you've just gotta do things for you and no one else.

~ Dee

Re: Boundaries (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:17:47 PM AEST
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Hell yeh, great write, touched my heart, we all have to change, some for the better...others for the worst *glares at sister* lol anyway yeh great write, truly wonderful *nods*

- Becca

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