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Array ( [sid] => 19019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lucid dreamer [time] => 2003-06-14 13:25:00 [hometext] => consciously observing the subconscious
this is the lucid dreamers domain. [bodytext] =>
Dare I ask  
of a sleeping self  
who and what  
to dream about?.  
Dare I dream  
wondering  
all along  
why whoever  
is in there  
won't stop  
touching me  
to fit them  
to serve them.  
Why whoever  
is in there  
won't let me be.  
I have sacrificed  
my earthly  
posessions  
for the gift  
of the sight  
of their  
charred  
aftermath.  
Layers and layers  
of dream traces  
in my faces  
my visions  
are squandered  
washed against  
remote corners  
of the mind  
where  
the faintest ideas  
gather and season  
longing  
to be set free  
from  
the grasp of reason.  
Dare I ask  
this lucid dreamer  
If he can spare  
the will to change?  
With this poem  
I move  
into a space  
where  
I can not be  
touched.  
With this gesture  
I move  
into a pasture  
where  
I can not be  
traced.   [comments] => 8 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 49 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
Lucid dreamer

Contributed by vincy on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical




Dare I ask  
of a sleeping self  
who and what  
to dream about?.  
Dare I dream  
wondering  
all along  
why whoever  
is in there  
won't stop  
touching me  
to fit them  
to serve them.  
Why whoever  
is in there  
won't let me be.  
I have sacrificed  
my earthly  
posessions  
for the gift  
of the sight  
of their  
charred  
aftermath.  
Layers and layers  
of dream traces  
in my faces  
my visions  
are squandered  
washed against  
remote corners  
of the mind  
where  
the faintest ideas  
gather and season  
longing  
to be set free  
from  
the grasp of reason.  
Dare I ask  
this lucid dreamer  
If he can spare  
the will to change?  
With this poem  
I move  
into a space  
where  
I can not be  
touched.  
With this gesture  
I move  
into a pasture  
where  
I can not be  
traced.  



Copyright © vincy ... [ 2003-06-14 13:25:00]
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Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by desertwispers on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:30:27 PM AEST
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enjoyable read here.


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:52:02 PM AEST
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You have a very interesting outlook on life.. Nice write..looking forward to more...
Jenni


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:14:37 AM AEST
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Interesting. I enjoyed it.

~ Moonlit


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsmith on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:29:35 AM AEST
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I have been interested in the subconscious mind for many years ands your poem offers offers an intelligent and, I believe, accurate analysis. Verty unique!


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by psychopoet on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:18:11 AM AEST
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Let me say something about dreams to you, dear cannadian new friend:
If you die for your dream, your dream is real.
Bau if you give up, it's not a dream, bau an illusion you had been built when you were sleeping...


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:47:27 AM AEST
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In any living creature, natural sleep does not shut everythig down. Yes, one can with dedication and practice, gain and increasing control over the body and mind but it takes years of study and practice.


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 04:07:34 AM AEST
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Wrybod is cent percent correct.. this is a good effort..I have written many successful poems by using subconscious images.. not only subconscious.. but also supra conscious images... as I have full control on my dreams and various levels of consciousness.. venkat


Re: Lucid dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 11:28:03 AM AEST
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very great poem, it is very moving to me.




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