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With a bored look examined your place
When you said, "Hello Lisa, how are you?"
An angry glare contorted my face.

I screamed for help the entire time
Using dark expressions to show i was in pain
But you couldn't follow the hints I threw
You said you wouldn't see me again.

The next doctor was similar
So was the next and the next
Can no one help me at all?
Am I really that complex?

I don't know why I'm silent
I don't know why I glare.
I don't know why I don't just say
All that i need to share.

But I must be a hopeless case.
I'll never get this right.
You might as well kick me out now.
There's no point to even try. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 25 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Visit to the Psychiatrist

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I first entered your room
With a bored look examined your place
When you said, "Hello Lisa, how are you?"
An angry glare contorted my face.

I screamed for help the entire time
Using dark expressions to show i was in pain
But you couldn't follow the hints I threw
You said you wouldn't see me again.

The next doctor was similar
So was the next and the next
Can no one help me at all?
Am I really that complex?

I don't know why I'm silent
I don't know why I glare.
I don't know why I don't just say
All that i need to share.

But I must be a hopeless case.
I'll never get this right.
You might as well kick me out now.
There's no point to even try.

Copyright © BlackFire9786 ... [ 2003-06-14 04:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Visit to the Psychiatrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 05:19:46 AM AEST
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Keep trying until you find the right fit. Choosing a counselor is tough, but there is someone out there.
Shari

Re: Visit to the Psychiatrist (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:48:45 AM AEST
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I agree, keep trying Lisa, i was lucky enough to find someone who's right for me, you can be too. great write, ttyl
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Visit to the Psychiatrist (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:55:38 PM AEST
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I've never had to see a docter, but I hope you can find the right one.

The Phantom

Re: Visit to the Psychiatrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Calbob on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 07:09:17 PM AEST
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psychiarists are kinda limited in their understanding. Its a job to them too though, really the best people to help you are those who actually care about you. I'll take a good friend over a psyke any day.

-calbob

Re: Visit to the Psychiatrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 08:10:26 PM AEST
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I understand you completly as i'm currently going through the same thing...I'm sick of everyone thinking i am attention seeking.

There is really nothing i can say to help you with this other than keep trying, thats what i'm going to do, if you ever need to talk i should be here.

- Becca

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