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Array ( [sid] => 18987 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why Do I Cry? [time] => 2003-06-13 18:05:00 [hometext] => Okay, it doesn't really explain this in the poem, but it is metaphoric. It is about a woman who has HIV, and she has all these boyfriends and she never tells them, and then she falls in love with one, and while she is getting treatment he is dying, so when he dies in her arms she realizes that she was in love for the veryfirst time, and she had killed the person that she loved. [bodytext] => In my hands all have bled,
in my hands one more has bled,
but why do i cry?

Blood is flowing through his shirt,
i have stabbed him in his heart,
but why do i cry?

His Peachy face and warm lips,
are turning pale and cold,
His Golden eyes,
are turning black,
his manly hands,
are turning weak and frail,
but why do i cry?

Now, I have seen the light... I love him,
i love his manly hands and peachy face,
i love his warm lips and golden eyes,
so i cry... i cry for love [comments] => 6 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Sarina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Why Do I Cry?

Contributed by Sarina on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

In my hands all have bled,
in my hands one more has bled,
but why do i cry?

Blood is flowing through his shirt,
i have stabbed him in his heart,
but why do i cry?

His Peachy face and warm lips,
are turning pale and cold,
His Golden eyes,
are turning black,
his manly hands,
are turning weak and frail,
but why do i cry?

Now, I have seen the light... I love him,
i love his manly hands and peachy face,
i love his warm lips and golden eyes,
so i cry... i cry for love

Copyright © Sarina ... [ 2003-06-13 18:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 08:12:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Sarina!! :)

Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 08:42:15 PM AEST
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Nicely done! Metaphor or not. This is a lovely
write.
Angel always...godspeed......joni

Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:06:19 PM AEST
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very good write
Shari

Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:30:03 PM AEST
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awwww!

Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:47:25 AM AEST
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Hey I like this but it's wrong.

Re: Why Do I Cry? (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 04:31:28 PM AEST
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you write very well
------------------------
i've had no experience in the
contents of the poem...
I can't even understand the
metaphor...I glad

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