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Array ( [sid] => 18975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Someone In My Life [time] => 2003-06-13 10:45:00 [hometext] => I wrote this during my "no one love me" "I'm tired of being alone" phase. Just seeing others together and the love they share, I was jealous and wanted it too. But who doesn't? [bodytext] => Everywhere I look, I see couples hand in hand
Walking close together, on the starlit sand.

Sometimes their eyes meet, and somehow they just know
What the other is thinking, their hearts just seem to glow.

A touch, a smile, or just a warm embrace,
I see the happiness inside, it’s painted on their face.

I admire the old man and woman, together for so long
To this day he holds her close, in his arms so strong.

Day in, day out, I envy those things I see
I want someone in my life, I’d like these things for me.
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Someone In My Life

Contributed by Goebelclm73 on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Everywhere I look, I see couples hand in hand
Walking close together, on the starlit sand.

Sometimes their eyes meet, and somehow they just know
What the other is thinking, their hearts just seem to glow.

A touch, a smile, or just a warm embrace,
I see the happiness inside, it’s painted on their face.

I admire the old man and woman, together for so long
To this day he holds her close, in his arms so strong.

Day in, day out, I envy those things I see
I want someone in my life, I’d like these things for me.




Copyright © Goebelclm73 ... [ 2003-06-13 10:45:00]
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Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by PrncssVGirl2217 on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:01:00 AM AEST
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I really love your poem it explains how I feel everyday walking through school, or a store. I get really jealous because I don't get to see my boyfriend every day and it makes me feel like I don't even have one.


Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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the poem you wrote is great
might even say, "First Rate"
You'll get your girl before,
That closing swinging door


Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 01:30:18 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all too well... hopefully it won't last much longer though. Good write!


Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:25:36 PM AEST
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excellent write


Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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a great write...i go through this everyday...it just doesnt seem fait sometimes does it? but though i do want someone in my life, i also don't....because its always fallen apart before too long with me, ha...well life has never been too kind to me...so thats ok i guess =)


Re: Someone In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:48:05 AM AEST
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A beautiful write of longing and desire...
Jenni




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