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Array ( [sid] => 18922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lost Laughter [time] => 2003-06-12 05:25:00 [hometext] => A very chaotic poem, because I wrote the above part in a later period. It's about holding back feelings and how bad that is for you. You might think you can do without crying, but crying is sometimes needed to throw it all out. Also about things that will loose it's meaning eventually, because we never said how we felt about it. [bodytext] => I have a smile
But I don't know how to wear it today
You lost all your laughter by laughing too loud
So sad when you say
"Darling, it really makes me cry
Whenever you're here with me"

Wind pushes my fingers
Like diamonds push away friends
Wind loses it's meaning
Like youth will in the end

I'm afraid to laugh too loud
Afraid of losing the ability to even smile
So I cry instead
Because I know I can do without

My mistake

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Lost Laughter

Contributed by Chenobi on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I have a smile
But I don't know how to wear it today
You lost all your laughter by laughing too loud
So sad when you say
"Darling, it really makes me cry
Whenever you're here with me"

Wind pushes my fingers
Like diamonds push away friends
Wind loses it's meaning
Like youth will in the end

I'm afraid to laugh too loud
Afraid of losing the ability to even smile
So I cry instead
Because I know I can do without

My mistake

Copyright © Chenobi ... [ 2003-06-12 05:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost Laughter (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:11:00 AM AEST
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very well written
Shari

Re: Lost Laughter (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:43:51 AM AEST
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Great write!!!
Jenni

Re: Lost Laughter (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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Here I will agree with you. Sometimes pouring out your feelings, no matter in the form of crying or what, really helps you a lot and makes you feel way better. It's a good write. Keep it up!

Re: Lost Laughter (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsmith on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:58:46 PM AEST
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You have a lot to share and you say it well. Very vulnerable.

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