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And everything will be okay.......... [bodytext] => Don’t give up
Let your dreams take flight
Come out from the darkness
And step into the light
Look up to the sky
Smile to a better day
Let yourself free
And throw all your worries away
Unchain your heart from all the pain
Wipe all your tears away
Just smile with happiness
And everything will be okay
Never give up on what you believe
Never let your dreams die
Believe you can make it
So take a chance and try
Don’t give up on hope
Don’t throw your life away
Just look to the sky
And look up to a better day.

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Look up to a better day

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Don’t give up
Let your dreams take flight
Come out from the darkness
And step into the light
Look up to the sky
Smile to a better day
Let yourself free
And throw all your worries away
Unchain your heart from all the pain
Wipe all your tears away
Just smile with happiness
And everything will be okay
Never give up on what you believe
Never let your dreams die
Believe you can make it
So take a chance and try
Don’t give up on hope
Don’t throw your life away
Just look to the sky
And look up to a better day.

Copyright Â© youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-06-11 22:45:00]
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Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:18:50 PM AEST
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refreshing and a very good write, uplifting
Shari

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:48:25 PM AEST
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Very uplifting!! Thanks for sharing this...
Jenni

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 12:44:37 AM AEST
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Very nice write for such a young poet. I was maybe your age when I started writing. I am only a couples of years older but very nice

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 02:30:21 AM AEST
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Nice write.Very uplifting.
Michelle

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:42:16 AM AEST
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If people read this everyday, what a wonderful world this would be. Thanks...

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:32:39 PM AEST
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Refreshing and lovely ... well written ... Jan

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:14:21 AM AEST
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Encouraging and inspiring. Good write. :)

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:58:48 PM AEST
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A lovely write....feeling much better after reading it :-)

Re: Look up to a better day (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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I liked this... very much
'Unchain your heart from all the pain
Wipe all your tears away'
I liked those two lines they spoke to me a lot. You write with such feeling.

Bobo (Joel)

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