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Shining brighter than any star
Seated here right beside me
Yet out of reach by so far

Bashfully fumbling
Whilst searching for my pen
Cannot cope with such beauty
Seen only now and then

I can sense you oh so pure
Overwhelming is your beauty
Is it possible, not this time
You're married and not to me

Forever I'll remember you
Dripping drops into those eyes
Trickling diamonds down your cheeks
This love was then realised

Such elegance and grace
Not glimpsing for so long
Out of reach once again
One more time to be so strong

Always wanting what I cannot
Hold tightly in these arms
But you call me the handsome one
You claim I've got such charm

Why not learning from those times
Made so difficult to bear
Oh how beautiful you are
It's just not damn well fair!

We would share our every love
For all time and for right now
Such pleasure and much laughter
Please help me help you now

You'll never get to read this
And never shall I tell
You're married and not to me
So alone will be left very well. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 449 [topic] => 30 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
You're Gorgeous!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



What a gloriously beautiful person
Shining brighter than any star
Seated here right beside me
Yet out of reach by so far

Bashfully fumbling
Whilst searching for my pen
Cannot cope with such beauty
Seen only now and then

I can sense you oh so pure
Overwhelming is your beauty
Is it possible, not this time
You're married and not to me

Forever I'll remember you
Dripping drops into those eyes
Trickling diamonds down your cheeks
This love was then realised

Such elegance and grace
Not glimpsing for so long
Out of reach once again
One more time to be so strong

Always wanting what I cannot
Hold tightly in these arms
But you call me the handsome one
You claim I've got such charm

Why not learning from those times
Made so difficult to bear
Oh how beautiful you are
It's just not damn well fair!

We would share our every love
For all time and for right now
Such pleasure and much laughter
Please help me help you now

You'll never get to read this
And never shall I tell
You're married and not to me
So alone will be left very well.




Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2003-06-11 02:45:00]
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Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST
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OH this is so very beautiful .. and close to my heart more than you know .. wonderfully written ... Jan


Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:19:04 PM AEST
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Dean,
This is a beautiful poem. You have expressed so much emotion in this poem. I love it.

ShadowsCloud


Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:31:28 AM AEST
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yes! what a beautiful write! So true most people want what they cant have.

mckayla


Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:20:48 PM AEST
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Against all odds I've read your words
Know the secrets of your heart
Time has passed and things have changed
Now we need never be apart.

I love you too My Handsome One
And thought that you should know
Your eyes reveal those things we share
My smiles and yours echo.

Five months have passed since your words were penned
Time of impossible dreams
But now it's clear to both of us
That love is all it seems.

Dean your poem is beautiful. Thank you.

The Beautiful One :-)







Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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Such emotional drama of words from your heart. Very well written DEan. I hope you are well. I haven't heard from you, and think that perhaps you were drafted to the ranks of the Queens army. You are missed and thought of my dear, take care,
Amber Rose @-->->--


Re: You're Gorgeous! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:29:48 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and sad. True emotion is not easy to capture, but you have done it here. Cheers!




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