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Array ( [sid] => 18880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Celebrity [time] => 2003-06-11 02:05:00 [hometext] => Rummaging through files and found this, written when pain was still overbearing. She never saw this (as usual) as it would've only offered a viable excuse for what happened. Anyway, now I've no idea who, why, what, where or how she is, so thought it may as well be posted. If however you do read this my love, I still and always will love you and was only suffering the pain of not understanding how to get 'being in love' right with you my first! [bodytext] => So you think
You've the tude
Of youthful Miss Spears

And you think
You're as wild
As little Miss Aguileers

So you think
You can writhe
With the beat of any drum

Just because
You've been told
That you have J'Lo's bum

You can act
Just as sweet
As Cathy Zeta J.

But your games
A young Madonna
Too tired wouldn't play

So spoiled
As a child
Now desperate to impress

You're a snob
Take a look at
How you acted in that dress

You would love
So very much
To be inside celebrity

But who can see
How bright you shine
No, not even me

Displaying yourself
As always being
Somewhere in Vogue

But I'd like just
To tell you dear
You ain't no Miss Minogue [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Celebrity

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

So you think
You've the tude
Of youthful Miss Spears

And you think
You're as wild
As little Miss Aguileers

So you think
You can writhe
With the beat of any drum

Just because
You've been told
That you have J'Lo's bum

You can act
Just as sweet
As Cathy Zeta J.

But your games
A young Madonna
Too tired wouldn't play

So spoiled
As a child
Now desperate to impress

You're a snob
Take a look at
How you acted in that dress

You would love
So very much
To be inside celebrity

But who can see
How bright you shine
No, not even me

Displaying yourself
As always being
Somewhere in Vogue

But I'd like just
To tell you dear
You ain't no Miss Minogue

Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2003-06-11 02:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Celebrity (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:14:49 PM AEST
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Dean,
I think that this is very good, and well written. I really enjoyed reading it.

ShadowsCloud

Re: Celebrity (User Rating: 1 )
by Qohinoor on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:13:15 AM AEST
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Unakeseveer, this piece of poery really clicked in me. Why are people so into appearances, appearances these days?

And also ever notice how rich people tend to look down on others with smaller paychecks or poorer families? I had many bad experiences with such families..especially mine.

My cousin, although I am older than her, is quite disrespectful of us mostly because she's richer than we are (her parents, that is) and therefore doesn't mix much with us. I'm also shocked at how she mixes about with the wrong company (she actually ran away at one time) and behaves rudely as if all the world does is OWE her a living.

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