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Array ( [sid] => 18831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Give Me The Stars [time] => 2003-06-09 18:05:00 [hometext] => I wrote this in about 2 minutes in a sudden moment of emotional turmoil. Don't take it too seriously. I was freaking out and overreacting and all that crap I do so wonderfully. :) Comments are still welcomed and appreciated though!! [bodytext] => I can't stand to know you're so far away
When you should be by my side
I want you to kiss these tears away
To hold me and make it all okay
To promise me forever you'll stay
I want to hear you whisper in my ear
The words I need more than anything to hear
I want you to give me the stars
To go anywhere for me
To be everything I need
To be my one true love
I don't want to be alone anymore
Sitting here, crying on my bed
Giving everything up for you
Hating the way I feel
My heart so consumed with loving you
So deep that I could never go back
So give me something real
That I can hold onto for real
Not just in the way that I feel
You always say you're thinking
Show me something I can see
Words are just words and I need more
I'm all tangled up 'cause it all goes so slow
So slow that it aches just a little
'Cause I can only fall in love with you
When I'm body and soul right here with you
And right now it almost feels like
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Give Me The Stars

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I can't stand to know you're so far away
When you should be by my side
I want you to kiss these tears away
To hold me and make it all okay
To promise me forever you'll stay
I want to hear you whisper in my ear
The words I need more than anything to hear
I want you to give me the stars
To go anywhere for me
To be everything I need
To be my one true love
I don't want to be alone anymore
Sitting here, crying on my bed
Giving everything up for you
Hating the way I feel
My heart so consumed with loving you
So deep that I could never go back
So give me something real
That I can hold onto for real
Not just in the way that I feel
You always say you're thinking
Show me something I can see
Words are just words and I need more
I'm all tangled up 'cause it all goes so slow
So slow that it aches just a little
'Cause I can only fall in love with you
When I'm body and soul right here with you
And right now it almost feels like
You're gone




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-06-09 18:05:00]
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Re: Give Me The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 10:03:36 PM AEST
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So full of emotion. I enjoyed this poem. I hope things work out the way you want them to.
Michelle


Re: Give Me The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:35:51 PM AEST
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Awww Moonlit, have you been reading my mind again?? Loved this so much..and can identify... Hope all works out for you soon...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Give Me The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:44:58 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, so full of emotion. Great writing!

sleepless_siren


Re: Give Me The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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awww!! big huggs n' lotsa love, wishing you every happiness:) nessa




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