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Array ( [sid] => 18823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => why [time] => 2003-06-09 12:45:00 [hometext] => about a girl that has a boyfriend that treats her bad and she wants to break free, but she thinks she loves him. [bodytext] => Invisible.
A shield of protection.
Invincible,
A power of collection.

Hang me by a string.
And try to make me do anything.
Stop messing with my mind,
Stop stepping towards me from behind.

Throw away that silver knife,
Through away all that strife.
I hate you,
And yet I cant get over you.

I try not to cry,
But all you do is lie.
You push me around,
And you push my down.

Every now and then, when I’m all alone,
I wish that there were nothing about you that was known.
Why can’t I pull away from you?
I seriously hate you.

You think you’re so cool,
You think of me as a fool,
Why can’t I get you out of my mind?
Why do you always remind,

That every time I’m alone,
Its like you’re going to suffocate my thrown,
Take my arm to my back
Pull up until it will crack.

Why can’t I get over you?
I hate you.
All you do is hurt me,
Each time. One, two, three.

And yet you act so fond of me,
You hold and warm me,
You treat me better,
Even though I know what you’re after.

So why cant I leave you,
Why cant say good-bye to you.
All you do is hurt me,
With you I can never be happy.

I’m such a fool towards you.
What did I ever do?
You’ll never get what you want
So stop hurting me and stop your hunt.

I see your stares, I see your eyes.
Graze over to all the other girls with guys.
You don’t even see me,
So why wont you let go of me?

I can’t take it anymore,
All you do is make me sore.
All I do is miss you.
Everything you say isn’t true.

What is this hold you have on me?
What is this hold that I can’t even see?
Why do you find pleasure in hurting me?
Why cant you just let me be?

You know what I’m saying?
This time I’m not playing.
Let me go.
I don’t love you.

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why

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Invisible.
A shield of protection.
Invincible,
A power of collection.

Hang me by a string.
And try to make me do anything.
Stop messing with my mind,
Stop stepping towards me from behind.

Throw away that silver knife,
Through away all that strife.
I hate you,
And yet I cant get over you.

I try not to cry,
But all you do is lie.
You push me around,
And you push my down.

Every now and then, when I’m all alone,
I wish that there were nothing about you that was known.
Why can’t I pull away from you?
I seriously hate you.

You think you’re so cool,
You think of me as a fool,
Why can’t I get you out of my mind?
Why do you always remind,

That every time I’m alone,
Its like you’re going to suffocate my thrown,
Take my arm to my back
Pull up until it will crack.

Why can’t I get over you?
I hate you.
All you do is hurt me,
Each time. One, two, three.

And yet you act so fond of me,
You hold and warm me,
You treat me better,
Even though I know what you’re after.

So why cant I leave you,
Why cant say good-bye to you.
All you do is hurt me,
With you I can never be happy.

I’m such a fool towards you.
What did I ever do?
You’ll never get what you want
So stop hurting me and stop your hunt.

I see your stares, I see your eyes.
Graze over to all the other girls with guys.
You don’t even see me,
So why wont you let go of me?

I can’t take it anymore,
All you do is make me sore.
All I do is miss you.
Everything you say isn’t true.

What is this hold you have on me?
What is this hold that I can’t even see?
Why do you find pleasure in hurting me?
Why cant you just let me be?

You know what I’m saying?
This time I’m not playing.
Let me go.
I don’t love you.





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Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 05:23:40 PM AEST
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It's a lovely write. My poem "Contradictions" is also about a confused girl who loves a same man and hates a same man. Well done!


Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 10:09:12 PM AEST
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Emotional write. If this is written in a true sense and this person is getting abused by this guy, please please get out and away. Believe me they dont change. Well done.
Michelle


Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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This was written very while. I love how the girl's thoughts keep on alterting between love, hate, and fear. Are you writing from personal experience or what? Great write.

Bobo (Joel)




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