Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 14:34:17 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 18810 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => An Angel [time] => 2003-06-09 04:05:00 [hometext] => One night I had a dream, and the poem below pretty much describes what that dream was like. [bodytext] => Walking along a winding road
My feet are heavy from my load
The sky is black, showing no light
Then out of the blue, a shine so bright

I turned my head the light's too much
Then on my hands I felt a touch
And on my ear I could feel a breath
My body shook, as I'm scared to death

I hear a voice, it calls to me
As I turn around, who could it be?
There she was, just standing there
I saw her beauty, beyond compare

She said my name, how does she know?
And how does her face, get that glow?
Her eyes sparkle, as she smiles at me
But she is an Angel, how could this be?

She takes my hand, we start to walk
I have no words, as I try to talk
This moment is one I've held deep inside
Is this the woman to be my bride?

So many questions are filling my head
Silently I ask, "Am I dead?"
Then we stop, and she says me
"I'm the one, he created for thee"

My eyes swell up, tears began to fall
And with her hand she wipes them all
She says, "This is a love without an end
I'll always be there, forever your friend"

"You have my heart, it's honest and true
I'll always love and cherish you
But now you must go, and soon you will see
An Angel before you, and she will be me."

The sound of a clock woke me from this dream
It was all so real, or so it did seem
I began to cry, then a knock at the door
I opened it quickly and heard, "Cry no more!"
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 304 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Goebelclm73 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
An Angel

Contributed by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Walking along a winding road
My feet are heavy from my load
The sky is black, showing no light
Then out of the blue, a shine so bright

I turned my head the light's too much
Then on my hands I felt a touch
And on my ear I could feel a breath
My body shook, as I'm scared to death

I hear a voice, it calls to me
As I turn around, who could it be?
There she was, just standing there
I saw her beauty, beyond compare

She said my name, how does she know?
And how does her face, get that glow?
Her eyes sparkle, as she smiles at me
But she is an Angel, how could this be?

She takes my hand, we start to walk
I have no words, as I try to talk
This moment is one I've held deep inside
Is this the woman to be my bride?

So many questions are filling my head
Silently I ask, "Am I dead?"
Then we stop, and she says me
"I'm the one, he created for thee"

My eyes swell up, tears began to fall
And with her hand she wipes them all
She says, "This is a love without an end
I'll always be there, forever your friend"

"You have my heart, it's honest and true
I'll always love and cherish you
But now you must go, and soon you will see
An Angel before you, and she will be me."

The sound of a clock woke me from this dream
It was all so real, or so it did seem
I began to cry, then a knock at the door
I opened it quickly and heard, "Cry no more!"




Copyright © Goebelclm73 ... [ 2003-06-09 04:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:16:16 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
You are a very gifted writer ,my friend...I truly hope your dreams come true!! ;) Smile! XoXo


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Keep on dreaming anythings possible! Loved this! Christina


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:09:46 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I hope you find this girl that you are looking for, I hope your dreams come true. I'm sure you'll make any girl happy!
hugs,
crazy


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:50:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wow, another truely beautiful poem, you will find her, and she will be lucky to have a man as sincere and as talented as you

Your Friend
-Becca


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:01:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
THANK YOU!! I can only hope that my dreams come true as well, but reality is quite a bit different than that of a dream, and much more painful. I'm glad you liked the poem!
Christopher


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:04:00 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Christina,
Yes, I suppose anything is possible. I'm glad you liked the poem! Thank you for your comment!
Christopher


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:06:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Crazy,
I hope I find her one day too, believe me, I'm tired of going through a lot of Ms Wrong's!! One day I'm sure I can make the right one happy. Thank you for your comments!!
Christopher


Re: An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:08:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Miss Becca, you are spoiling me! Thank you for the comments, you are way too sweet!!
Christopher




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com