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Array ( [sid] => 18744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2003-06-07 19:05:00 [hometext] => This poem relates to my Mother's death. It doesn't matter how old you are. You are always your mother's child. [bodytext] => One is never ready to lose a mother.

Be prepared to tumble because surely you will fall
Once you learn the secret
A mother does mean all.

I wake up in the morning with an empty heart.
My room is filled with sunlight
Yet I am in the dark.

I would give my heart and soul
If I could sit by her side.
Freezing still the moment
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Lost

Contributed by joni553 on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

One is never ready to lose a mother.

Be prepared to tumble because surely you will fall
Once you learn the secret
A mother does mean all.

I wake up in the morning with an empty heart.
My room is filled with sunlight
Yet I am in the dark.

I would give my heart and soul
If I could sit by her side.
Freezing still the moment
Just before Mom died.

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:58:34 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss, but remember as long as she is in your heart, she is always close by
Shari

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 10:32:05 PM AEST
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This poem is very touching. Im sorry for your loss. She will always be with you!!
Michelle
For the ones we love are never gone they live within our hearts......................

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 02:27:25 AM AEST
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Lovely write...I'm in agreement with you, since I lost my Mom when I was 23...and now I'm twice that age..and miss her so much still... but everythng she has ever taught me is still with me...and each value instilled by her...is still upheld... Loved this...thank you.
Jenni

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 11:33:30 AM AEST
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lovely write my dear. YOu may feel lost now, but in time as you heal, but you never forget her. She is with you always, and in ways you may never have known. I do understand, I too lost my mum ten yrs. ago. at first I felt lost, but in time, I know she is with me, and is my guardian angel. take some moments to look thru some things of hers that you shared with her, and you will in time not feel sorrow, but a sense of being and as is she is right there.
take care
Amber Rose :)

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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My moms been gone now for about 2 years I know this grief,It never goes away!
You are so right in this poem,My world just stopped! Christina

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:52:36 PM AEST
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My heart and prayers go out to you! This is a lovely write to your mom!!!
Angel always...Godspeed... joni 0:-)

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:45:54 AM AEST
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I am at loss of words..my mother is 82 years old. and my father 91.. they are now suffering from old age.. mother almost all bedridden..
sory joni for your loss... first stanza.. almost all
amazed me. venkat

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by nicky on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:52:04 PM AEST
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good one man

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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touched by this short poem
which freezes the impression
your grief is well shared.

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