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Array ( [sid] => 18728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Outdo My Inner Hatred [time] => 2003-06-07 13:35:00 [hometext] => feel free to comment [bodytext] => Hate me
Just do it
Hate me
Forever
(I understand)
There are times
When I hate myself
More than you do
(If that’s possible)
I could say im sorry
For the rest
Of my life
(And then some)
But it still wouldn’t matter
And you still wouldn’t care
(I beg for forgiveness)
I cant take back what I did
And somehow alter my past
(No matter how much I want to)
But Ive learned
From my mistakes
And im making better choices
(Why can’t u see that)
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 25 [informant] => deadly_blaZe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Outdo My Inner Hatred

Contributed by deadly_blaZe on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Hate me
Just do it
Hate me
Forever
(I understand)
There are times
When I hate myself
More than you do
(If that’s possible)
I could say im sorry
For the rest
Of my life
(And then some)
But it still wouldn’t matter
And you still wouldn’t care
(I beg for forgiveness)
I cant take back what I did
And somehow alter my past
(No matter how much I want to)
But Ive learned
From my mistakes
And im making better choices
(Why can’t u see that)

Copyright Â© deadly_blaZe ... [ 2003-06-07 13:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:07:47 PM AEST
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well written..I hope whoever you wrote this for finds a way to forgive for thier sake as well as yours..for to hold resentment eats away at the inside of a person
Shari

Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:00:21 PM AEST
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I really like this, it reminds me of myself. I hope you find what you need.

~ Moonlit

Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 09:01:45 PM AEST
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True hard hitting and not to long short and powerful... sometimes no matter how hard u try u can't plz ppl. There not worth time. Look forward to more of yer stuff.

Bobo (Joel)

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