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Ice Wall
Contributed by
withlove_me
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Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 09:05:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I stumble in my darkness,with out stretched arms
I should have them across my chest,
Protecting my Heart from more harm.
As I stumble I bump into walls,that I cant break down
I cant get to the other side
Where your heart I know will be found.
Where did this wall come from,why is it so high?
It feels so slick and cold
Did you build it out of ice?
You used to be so soft and warm,even lady like
Now you are an Ice Princess
And you turned that way overnight.
You love has turned cold,so you built this wall
Did you make it sound proof?
Cant you hear me when I call?
You wont talk,not a word,I dont know what is felt
So I'll stumble around with out stretched arms
And hope that ICE WALL WILL MELT.
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2002-08-06 21:05:01]
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Re: Ice Wall
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 04:36:08 AM AEST
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As I was reading this was easy to visualize. I really liked this poem and felt the emotion behind it.
Take care
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Re: Ice Wall
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:28:28 AM AEST
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The content here is sad..the imagery...perfect!!
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Re: Ice Wall
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by purplerosepoet on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:16:41 PM AEST
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| You made it very easy to read a sad :( poem and you put the imagery in here so well. Keep writing poems like this and you will be famous some day. |
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