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[aid] => mick
[title] => Never Enough
[time] => 2019-06-26 13:44:12
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[bodytext] => My life has never had its share of glory
I guess that will be the final story
Never enough, never enough
I`ll still go on and on and call its bluff
Whatever it shall be, it will never be enough
Someday maybe my star will shine brightly
My heavenly wings readied for flight
I`ll take my God-given rights before I slip off into the night
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Never Enough
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Wednesday, 26th June 2019 @ 01:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My life has never had its share of glory
I guess that will be the final story
Never enough, never enough
I`ll still go on and on and call its bluff
Whatever it shall be, it will never be enough
Someday maybe my star will shine brightly
My heavenly wings readied for flight
I`ll take my God-given rights before I slip off into the night
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jamesstockdale
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2019-06-26 13:44:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 27th June 2019 @ 09:25:13 AM AEST (User
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I have an idea based on what we/'/ve talked about before about what could bother you so, but I hope now you do all you can and stay strong, and I hope that deep down you feel all the better a person for it.
If you ever need someone to talk to/with to vent, let me know by message. Can always talk on Facebook messenger in a pinch :)
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 29th June 2019 @ 12:37:50 AM AEST (User
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Do not know what dark cloud is shadowing you
but understand
your star will always shine bright
to many of us |
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 29th June 2019 @ 10:22:51 PM AEST (User
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Men are so hard on themselves. You needn/'/t save the world to be worthy of glory. My heros are the gas who take out the garbage every night.
Your star has lit up this corner of the internet for a long time James! Your poems speak to all of us, because we are ALL (as you say) calling lifes bluff!
You are one of the few writers who share that with us. It is comforting to discover that even the nice guys feel like they are swimming in jello now and then. Pass me that oar! I think the captain wants to water ski.
softerware
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 30th June 2019 @ 08:52:52 PM AEST (User
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Everyone feels this way about themselves sometimes. ...But... if you feed it, it will grow ... so be careful what you are nourishing.
~Scorp |
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 2nd July 2019 @ 01:02:42 PM AEST (User
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My friend, I understand 100% how you feel. Im going
through something similar at the moment. There are
a couple of things in life right now that are beating me
down. Im just having a hard time putting them into
words at the present time. I cant go and start making
assumptions based on suspicions without evidence.
But back to your piece, I know how your self-worth is
affected due to the way you are treated by a loved
one. You did a great job putting your thoughts
into words. If you want a listening ear just let me
know.
Rich |
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Re: Never Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 04:40:20 AM AEST (User
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// Wow! Your star is shining brightly in this poem, I`ll tell you what. Me likes.
Off to the next one.
Thanks,
Dugan |
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