|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
Contributed by
Kay-P-M-Devenish
on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
Nineteen fifty one/'/s the year
I first discovered birth,
it was my own,
since then I/'/ve grown
to love this planet Earth.
When I was five I started school,
My teachers? catholic nuns.
they taught me all the right things,
but failed to teach me sums.
My love of verse and poetry
started as a kid,
then at thirteen,
I tried to write,
and really bad, I did.
While still a teen, I married,
then put away my pen,
until I had a baby girl,
then brought it out again.
At twenty three
I had three kids,
so wrote them funny rhymes,
like /'/worms/'/ and /'/eggs/'/
and /'/silly fish,/'/
I sprouted lots of /'/lines./'/
Back in those days
I cared too much
what other people said,
I had some critics knock my poems
(it really hurt my /'/head./'/)
I shoved the lot into a box
and gave away my verse
until in time I realised...
that critics are /'/a curse./'/
Some things I write
are just for fun,
but some are from my core,
the one called /'/third world mother.../'/
is the one I/'/m crazy for.
And when I wrote the sad stuff,
my own world was a mess,
but since at least a decade now
I/'/m writing less of stress.
I try to empathise my work
to other peoples lives,
it gives more subject matter
and sharpens up my knives,
I like to disect everything,
to look at all the sides,
and reading other peoples work,
refreshes as it guides.
I/'/ve worked at doing ladies hair
and had an art, craft shop,
I had my fourth child late in life
it/'/s kept me on /'/the hop./'/
I found /'/your poetry/'/ by chance,
while surfing on the net,
I think Mick Puttock is /'/the best/'/
for poets he/'/s /'/our bet./'/
This site, that he has made for us,
has made me yearn to write,
I haven/'/t felt this way for years,
it/'/s such a sheer delight.
So thank you if you read /'/me./'/
and if you don/'/t...SO WHAT!
And to Mick Puttock and his site....
real STYLE is what you/'/ve got !!!!!
Footnote:
I wrote this for Mick Putock/'/s original site and I feel strongly it is still true today after many changes to his site and its new look , I still call it /'/my home base/'/ for poetry,guess it is because I am an Aussie too,I have my poems on many sites but this one is my home .Thank you Mick.
From your friend,
Kay.
Copyright ©
Kay-P-M-Devenish
... [
2002-08-06 13:46:49] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:52:36 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Kay...no better time than the present to sub this..:>) I enjoyed it again...and you know ypdc is my home also....even tho I don't post/write much now.... Missed ya..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Thank you Jenni for your comment,the walls have been painted and the furniture is new but the family are the same.
sincerely
From,
Kay. |
|
|
Re: My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:08:42 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
hey girl bout time you got that pen in motion again and we seen some of those sweet ryhmes of yours have been wondering where you got too...glad to see your back
hugs from Chrissylee |
|
|
Re: My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:57:31 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I thought you must have been mad at me or something ,or else in England........ you are the one who dissappeared,where have you been????!!!!!!!!!! I have missed you heaps and heaps.I am so happy to have read this comment from you it has just made my whole day...week month year...well maybe not quite the year... but almost...(I am smiling).I will be at my daughters till monday but will try to contact you to say hi when I get back....till then,you have really made my day chrissylee,hope you are well and very happy.Hugs and love from
Kay.
xxoo |
|
|
Re: My bio for your poetry dot com re-submitted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by chatabox on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 02:41:46 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
delightful Kay.....great write. |
|
|
|