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[aid] => mick
[title] => Tell me lies
[time] => 2019-01-10 05:23:39
[hometext] => He could make me believe anything.
[bodytext] => I’m tired of blonde he said you know, when my hair turned gray.
Some extra weight on you looks great; it’s healthier they say!
Some have wrinkles, you have crinkles, from the smiles we`ve shared.
And glasses make you look so smart; Lets get a second pair!
Others wobble or they toddle but, my sweet, you sway.
Walk slower while I contemplate that gentle svelt sashe!
Love grows cold in time I’m told. We take it all for granted.
It`s true some age to witches brew; But you improve decanted!
When our fires an embers glow, I`ll not forget you know,
Every little lie you`ve told; To make me love you so.
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Tell me lies
Contributed by
softerware
on
Thursday, 10th January 2019 @ 05:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I’m tired of blonde he said you know, when my hair turned gray.
Some extra weight on you looks great; it’s healthier they say!
Some have wrinkles, you have crinkles, from the smiles we`ve shared.
And glasses make you look so smart; Lets get a second pair!
Others wobble or they toddle but, my sweet, you sway.
Walk slower while I contemplate that gentle svelt sashe!
Love grows cold in time I’m told. We take it all for granted.
It`s true some age to witches brew; But you improve decanted!
When our fires an embers glow, I`ll not forget you know,
Every little lie you`ve told; To make me love you so.
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softerware
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2019-01-10 05:23:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tell me lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th January 2019 @ 08:49:04 AM AEST (User
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// Excellent!!! Love it! |
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Re: Tell me lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 10th January 2019 @ 03:26:39 PM AEST (User
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love this take the comment and don/'/t complain some people long for such remarks. My friend true beautify lie within. and I think you are a gem .love this excellent poem. |
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Re: Tell me lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 10th January 2019 @ 09:11:30 PM AEST (User
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Crazy good! I love it! |
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Re: Tell me lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 11th January 2019 @ 11:56:04 AM AEST (User
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This is amazing. We/'/ve told those little lies to make those we love...love us and also to save their feelings.
"I love your new haircut, makes you look sophisticated."
"No those jeans / pants don/'/t make your butt look big."
"That color on you is very slimming."
Yet we continue to get asked questions that our significant other knows they wont get an honest answer to.
Rich
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Re: Tell me lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th January 2019 @ 08:36:26 AM AEST (User
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I do love this poem SW.
I find it brilliant.
In anything anyone studies closely
I find brilliance,
all-encompassing like a brilliant
star that burns bright, that
I might see for a short spate
of time as I breathe
To me a beauty far off
in the heaven far past
visible light,
capturing my complete
thought and only hoping
to see it shine
only because it does
capture my complete
attention changing
who I am, and one thing
leads to another beyond
far beyond my own control
I capture your light
It is all I will ever
hope to ever do
And for that I am eternally
grateful---
that/'/s how a young person
studying physics
becomes engrossed
in your brilliance
should you ever require
only a small glimpse of a reason
why
should you ever require
only a small glimpse of a reason
why
If anything anyone studies closely
I find brilliant
like you
It is worth everything
to
Peace!
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