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Array ( [sid] => 185733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2019-01-01 03:33:24 [hometext] => This poem is for my mom/'/s godmother, two cousins and brother, who each died between the end of October 2017 and June of 2018. We miss you very much. [bodytext] => The wind blows rustling
Through the trees;
The air echoes with
The buzzing of bees.

Flowers stretch to
Reach the sun;
Deer come out
To frolic and run.

Silence is broken
With coyote/'/s cry;
The birds come home
And start to fly.

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Contributed by Speedy on Tuesday, 1st January 2019 @ 03:33:24 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The wind blows rustling
Through the trees;
The air echoes with
The buzzing of bees.

Flowers stretch to
Reach the sun;
Deer come out
To frolic and run.

Silence is broken
With coyote/'/s cry;
The birds come home
And start to fly.

Copyright © Speedy ... [ 2019-01-01 03:33:24]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 1st January 2019 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
What a vision and scene to behold.
When I lose a loved one, nature is my retreat.
It for me explains the journey of life and eases my pain. God Bless You.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Zaf_Stud on Tuesday, 1st January 2019 @ 05:06:56 PM AEST
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Truly tremendous!
A big heart-felt voice in few words.
May your beloved rest in peace.
They would thank you for this.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 8th January 2019 @ 11:17:32 PM AEST
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You may be describing heaven. It is a lovely scene and a heartfelt gift to those you honor.
There is an abundance of love shared and expressed in your family. How fortunate you are.
softerware

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by Jecks on Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 05:14:37 PM AEST
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A great memorial. Sorry for your loss.

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by emystar on Sunday, 11th August 2019 @ 01:45:28 PM AEST
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Very beautifull

blessings,
emy

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Tuesday, 20th August 2019 @ 03:47:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery for a lovely sentiment!
May you and yours always know and hold peace!
Thank you for sharing!

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Vic on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 06:51:13 PM AEST
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A beautiful write. I wish you peace.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Tuesday, 31st August 2021 @ 12:35:53 PM AEST
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Hi Hannah. I like this poem. I notice there is a format to your writing. While you do an excellent job within that pentameter, have you thought about mixing styles up a bit? You have the gift....explore the multiple variations that poetry offers.

Also, you are living proof that comments beget comments. You/'/re ratio of 600/23 is astounding. And very applaudable. I do wish you shared more poems, though. They are a pleasure to read, my friend.

Michael

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