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of information
technology
There are No Excuses
for being
a system slave
working for the comfort
of others
while they teach your children
how to hate
within the confines
of this jungle
of competitions
Low status
and pain

Within this age
of information
technology
there is so much
we could attain
Yet you chose
to Live
Breed
and Die
as a simple
System slave

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Group Hug

Contributed by drone on Sunday, 11th November 2018 @ 07:38:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Within this age
of information
technology
There are No Excuses
for being
a system slave
working for the comfort
of others
while they teach your children
how to hate
within the confines
of this jungle
of competitions
Low status
and pain

Within this age
of information
technology
there is so much
we could attain
Yet you chose
to Live
Breed
and Die
as a simple
System slave

Copyright © drone ... [ 2018-11-11 07:38:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Group Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Monday, 12th November 2018 @ 05:19:37 AM AEST
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super relatable. very interesting. i can follow this. please keep writing.

Re: Group Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 13th November 2018 @ 05:20:02 AM AEST
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The machine rolls on and over us

Re: Group Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 13th November 2018 @ 07:20:24 PM AEST
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Many today prefer not to think.
They just go with the flow. Very intriguing write!

Re: Group Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 16th November 2018 @ 05:03:52 AM AEST
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We let our leaders do the talking and decision making; even if we dont agree. Its easier to follow and swallow than lead and seed.
You can/'/t be faulted for what you don/'/t do.
Most of us don/'/t want to be high profile and a target for criticism. If you want to be loved, don/'/t become a leader!
Slaves have no stress.
softerware

Re: Group Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Friday, 16th November 2018 @ 10:12:21 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I look forward to reading more from you

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