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[aid] => mick
[title] => The one who broke her dreams
[time] => 2018-10-12 16:13:18
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => I hear you say you’re done
I hear you say you’re leaving
I’m trying so hard to grasp and understand that this time it is for real
I see it. I hear you tell me then repeat it
I’m struggling with knowing that your love for me is gone
I don’t know how to just turn it of...
It’s been there for years...
Even though I’ve made mistakes
I never stopped loving you
I was just so lost in life
I won’t deny why you feel this way.
I know I did this.
I know there’s nothing but this sadness I’ve made
By holding on so tightly, to someone who’s letting go
I don’t know how to stop loving you
I never figure out how to make it go away
I never understood how not let it affect me
I don’t know how to be as strong as you
I am sorry that I failed.
I know it’s my fault
My frailty and cowardice
My shortcomings
How weak I am
Everything I lack to make you happy
It’s me...
The biggest part of it all I realize
The hardest pill to swallow
Isn’t knowing that I created this misery which has been eating me upside...
It’s knowing that I’m the one who broke your dreams...
I’m so sorry
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[counter] => 266
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[informant] => Holderofthestone
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[ratings] => 0
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[topicname] => SadPoetry
)
The one who broke her dreams
Contributed by
Holderofthestone
on
Friday, 12th October 2018 @ 04:13:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hear you say you’re done
I hear you say you’re leaving
I’m trying so hard to grasp and understand that this time it is for real
I see it. I hear you tell me then repeat it
I’m struggling with knowing that your love for me is gone
I don’t know how to just turn it of...
It’s been there for years...
Even though I’ve made mistakes
I never stopped loving you
I was just so lost in life
I won’t deny why you feel this way.
I know I did this.
I know there’s nothing but this sadness I’ve made
By holding on so tightly, to someone who’s letting go
I don’t know how to stop loving you
I never figure out how to make it go away
I never understood how not let it affect me
I don’t know how to be as strong as you
I am sorry that I failed.
I know it’s my fault
My frailty and cowardice
My shortcomings
How weak I am
Everything I lack to make you happy
It’s me...
The biggest part of it all I realize
The hardest pill to swallow
Isn’t knowing that I created this misery which has been eating me upside...
It’s knowing that I’m the one who broke your dreams...
I’m so sorry
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Holderofthestone
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2018-10-12 16:13:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The one who broke her dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 12th October 2018 @ 08:59:26 PM AEST (User
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Wow. Takes your breath away. I was actually holding mine as I read it, waiting for it to take another turn, but instead it kept its cadence and became more and more personal and sincere.
I felt as if I were eavesdropping on a conversation I was not meant to overhear.
Splendidly written.
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Re: The one who broke her dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyCC on
Saturday, 13th October 2018 @ 08:15:29 PM AEST (User
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What a beautiful and genuinely introspective piece!
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Re: The one who broke her dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
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Wow, so sad............. |
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Re: The one who broke her dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 3rd August 2020 @ 05:00:24 PM AEST (User
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Read it again,,,,,, still sad :( |
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Re: The one who broke her dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 29th December 2022 @ 08:39:15 AM AEST (User
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Your poem is most admirable. I can see myself saying some of these words. I hope things work out in your relationship. |
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