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[title] => Poet
[time] => 2018-09-19 21:46:23
[hometext] => A voice i always knew i had but was afraid to share
[bodytext] => Aphrodisiactic love lost then found althougth she was never mine.
Tantilating movement in her eyes show remorse in tears of a false cry.
She was selfish giving kind mean discontent content never really one thought.
On lifes stage was the show case of the many masks she wore was blind too all but one.
Adore by all understood by few thankful to have been introduced to your world.
Rythmatic word play silent pause a phrase chase ink to paper.
There is a true beauty is this form of spoken word i am humbled by It.
My voice my mistress poetry i am forever you slave.
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Poet
Contributed by
SPOKENWORDARTIST
on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 09:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Aphrodisiactic love lost then found althougth she was never mine.
Tantilating movement in her eyes show remorse in tears of a false cry.
She was selfish giving kind mean discontent content never really one thought.
On lifes stage was the show case of the many masks she wore was blind too all but one.
Adore by all understood by few thankful to have been introduced to your world.
Rythmatic word play silent pause a phrase chase ink to paper.
There is a true beauty is this form of spoken word i am humbled by It.
My voice my mistress poetry i am forever you slave.
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SPOKENWORDARTIST
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 10:32:39 PM AEST (User
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you had me at the first word! bravo! awesome write!!!
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 21st September 2018 @ 05:13:24 PM AEST (User
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Your description is clever, and the concept original.
I was a bit distracted by the lack of punctuation to guide me through the first read. But by the second I was ready for your style!
Your turn now to share by reading and commenting on someone else poems here! Thank you,
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd September 2018 @ 09:28:49 AM AEST (User
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poet like listening to dogs bark
hello hello I think
but I could never know
enough about myself
to bark or could I bark
would I bark
and then in the park
would I eat the goats pellet of poop
like it twas candy
And then bark some more ---
probably, I think
Peace!
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd September 2018 @ 09:51:44 AM AEST (User
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A poet
is not in ones head
this written word
that expose
about how good
or how abject poor
and horrible
to compare
to another thought
that one reads
And touches their
soul in someway
that is inside
a phrase or any
old rhyme
at any old time
high or low
or loathing
this poet has nothing
that/'/s all they got
And that/'/s all they ever
had
Or maybe they never
had nothing
still they wrote something
making little sense
feeling humiliated afterwards
with only words
not even any expletives
sure, okay, maybe some
freakish sort of self satisfaction
boring as though it might
be,, just like taking a self
photo, or drawing a picture
or mostly writing a letter
with god awful prose
And reading it later
intently to one day
tare down,
starting with zero
weight, a free thought
one weighs
against their thoughts
the vintage collections
of one on the precipice
of believing nothing at
all
I suppose maybe
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 27th September 2018 @ 05:06:38 AM AEST (User
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you have unique way of writing
keep it up
good poem |
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Re: Poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 27th September 2018 @ 01:16:08 PM AEST (User
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I have to agree that you have a unique style which is never a bad thing. Ive never thought of myself as being a slave to poetry but poetry more as a tool to convey feelings and thoughts that I would otherwise have difficulty saying out loud. Although anyone can write, it takes a certain kind of writer to be able to draw the reader in and keep them coming back for more. Great piece and keep up the good work.
Rich |
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