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because I know that you will
your loving misery
and will not stop
you need to spread your ill will

you are a vintage edition
of a modern day vampire
who comes out in the day light
a master of illusion
using confusion
crushing souls as you fly

here you come again
saying you are friend
but as I look into your eyes
I see its just another cruel lie

your face is cracking
as you try not to laugh
because you think you have me fooled
now you are looking surprised
as you realize that I am on to you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Shut The Front Door

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 20th August 2018 @ 09:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



you know you were lying when you said no
because I know that you will
your loving misery
and will not stop
you need to spread your ill will

you are a vintage edition
of a modern day vampire
who comes out in the day light
a master of illusion
using confusion
crushing souls as you fly

here you come again
saying you are friend
but as I look into your eyes
I see its just another cruel lie

your face is cracking
as you try not to laugh
because you think you have me fooled
now you are looking surprised
as you realize that I am on to you




Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2018-08-20 09:21:44]
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Re: Shut The Front Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 13th February 2019 @ 12:42:00 AM AEST
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Well I just loved this and can/'/t for the life of me understand why no one else left a comment. I can feel the hurt, bitterness and out and out anger in every line. I also could hear the "screw you" and the finality. That " you/'/re not going to play me ever again" you/'/ve woven into that last line. Great emotional writing!

Very well done
Barkeep! A drink for my talented ( and very strong) friend.

Raker




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