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[title] => Another day
[time] => 2018-08-03 22:49:21
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[bodytext] => When all we have left is the person inside; No hope, and no help, no strength and no pride.
No saving the day, no rescue, no cure; When all we can do is hang on and endure;
Hold yourself close, be silent and wait. Tomorrow will come and it won’t be too late;
To gather the pieces and carve out a space; where its quiet and safe til the past is erased.
When a castles a prison, its better by far;
To leave what you have to be what you are.
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Another day
Contributed by
softerware
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Friday, 3rd August 2018 @ 10:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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When all we have left is the person inside; No hope, and no help, no strength and no pride.
No saving the day, no rescue, no cure; When all we can do is hang on and endure;
Hold yourself close, be silent and wait. Tomorrow will come and it won’t be too late;
To gather the pieces and carve out a space; where its quiet and safe til the past is erased.
When a castles a prison, its better by far;
To leave what you have to be what you are.
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Re: Another day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 5th August 2018 @ 02:16:53 AM AEST (User
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I love the message of this poem. The feeling of being trapped and without the ability or strength to escape yourself is the worst feeling I have ever suffered. The beauty of tomorrow, thank God for that. Lovely work here,
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Re: Another day
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 15th August 2018 @ 04:52:33 AM AEST (User
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I love this!! I/'/ve been in this place so many times in my life. eloquently expressed in such a straightforward way. love the last line! |
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