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[aid] => mick
[title] => Siren Call
[time] => 2018-07-30 12:44:30
[hometext] => “I cannot tarry longer. The sea that calls all things unto her calls me” ― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet
[bodytext] => / //// /
he was a sailor, home from the sea,
and all his time was given to me.
my myriad stories,
all of my fears;
the dreams and plans
poured into his ears.
he took it all in,
gave it its due
prompted me further,
until it felt true.
yet ever so often,
I would see in his gaze
the looks cast as anchors
to turquoise waves.
he was a sailor, home from the sea,
and all his love was given to me.
deep kisses of passion,
caresses of skin;
love at its heights
and the depths of its sin.
but in the darkest of morn,
before day has its start,
I sensed the yearning
that stirred his true heart.
he was a sailor, gone to the sea
and for all of my heartache,
it was where he should be.
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Siren Call
Contributed by
spike
on
Monday, 30th July 2018 @ 12:44:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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/ //// /
he was a sailor, home from the sea,
and all his time was given to me.
my myriad stories,
all of my fears;
the dreams and plans
poured into his ears.
he took it all in,
gave it its due
prompted me further,
until it felt true.
yet ever so often,
I would see in his gaze
the looks cast as anchors
to turquoise waves.
he was a sailor, home from the sea,
and all his love was given to me.
deep kisses of passion,
caresses of skin;
love at its heights
and the depths of its sin.
but in the darkest of morn,
before day has its start,
I sensed the yearning
that stirred his true heart.
he was a sailor, gone to the sea
and for all of my heartache,
it was where he should be.
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spike
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2018-07-30 12:44:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Siren Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 30th July 2018 @ 08:42:36 PM AEST (User
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There will always be those that are drawn uncontrollably to the sea, like a mistress that calls from the deep.
You/'/ve echoed this brilliantly here.
Nice write
Steve |
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Re: Siren Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 3rd August 2018 @ 05:32:09 PM AEST (User
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A lovely tale that reads like a rocking chair conversation. It is both romantic and philosophical.
We are what we are as your sailor proves, as he steps down for a moment from his reality to wear anothers dream.
Your beautiful story entices us to step out of ourselves and look back; to take stock; to nourish our dreams. Most inspiring, and well written.
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Re: Siren Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Friday, 3rd August 2018 @ 07:19:58 PM AEST (User
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Hi Spikey me ol cobber!! Long time no speak.
Loved this piece and written in your own unique way - no words used where they are not useful - short, sharp, and to the point. /'//'/deep kisses of passion, caresses of skin; love at its heights and the depths of its sin./'//'/ A gamut of human emotions contained therein. Power to your pen, spike! |
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Re: Siren Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 04:20:13 AM AEST (User
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You effectively convey that feeling, that I want you but I know I have to let you go feeling. Great ending to an overall awesome poem!
-Kara aka allforyou |
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Re: Siren Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 04:20:14 AM AEST (User
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You effectively convey that feeling, that I want you but I know I have to let you go feeling. Great ending to an overall awesome poem!
-Kara aka allforyou |
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