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[title] => The Light Within:
[time] => 2018-07-13 20:44:37
[hometext] => JUST GOT TO FLOW WITH IT.
[bodytext] => As cherry is red,
and some wines are blue.
I have no excuse for not loving you!
As the ocean is deep, and the desert is hot.
so are your words please never stop!
As the sky is blue and the trees are green.
So is my love I could never explain.
As the earth is round and spinning in space.
please just remember we share the same faith.
As the ground is brown and so is our skin.
Let`s just remember we all have sinned.
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[informant] => richard_campbell
[notes] => Edited for spelling, per request ~ Moderator_18 July 13, 2018
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The Light Within:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Friday, 13th July 2018 @ 08:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As cherry is red,
and some wines are blue.
I have no excuse for not loving you!
As the ocean is deep, and the desert is hot.
so are your words please never stop!
As the sky is blue and the trees are green.
So is my love I could never explain.
As the earth is round and spinning in space.
please just remember we share the same faith.
As the ground is brown and so is our skin.
Let`s just remember we all have sinned.
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richard_campbell
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2018-07-13 20:44:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Light Within:
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 14th July 2018 @ 04:22:36 PM AEST (User
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When it comes to sinning, we can all relate!
Sharing the same faith, as you point out here, is our strength.
I enjoyed the way you rhymed your story! It has a ROSES ARE RED sound to it that makes it whimsical.
softerware
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Re: The Light Within:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 15th July 2018 @ 09:01:16 PM AEST (User
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Agape love is definitely apparent here. I love how you start out with what seems to be the love between a couple but then spills over into brotherly love for all. Great work here. God bless you,
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Re: The Light Within:
(User Rating: 1 ) by redwest802 on
Monday, 16th July 2018 @ 04:54:27 AM AEST (User
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I like it! I love the flow of words, well done!
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