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rocking film star features
using that mis direction
so I never knew what was happening

I dared to dream
that we could dive deep
never to be found
as we traversed the ocean

The bliss ran cold
and like an addict I wanted more
but when I turned the tap
all it did was drip
there was no more emotion

look what this has done to me
Illusion is my drug she is all that I need
confusing me by keep coming around
I come alive
every time she lets me down

you have got to get in
before you can get out
and once you get in
you got to deal with all the doubts
but
none of that matters
because all I can think about is her now

I am a no man
living in a no mans land
trapped and living life in reverse
trying to hang on
as she comes back once again

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MadMan Waters

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 17th June 2018 @ 04:46:14 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Never met a girl like her before
rocking film star features
using that mis direction
so I never knew what was happening

I dared to dream
that we could dive deep
never to be found
as we traversed the ocean

The bliss ran cold
and like an addict I wanted more
but when I turned the tap
all it did was drip
there was no more emotion

look what this has done to me
Illusion is my drug she is all that I need
confusing me by keep coming around
I come alive
every time she lets me down

you have got to get in
before you can get out
and once you get in
you got to deal with all the doubts
but
none of that matters
because all I can think about is her now

I am a no man
living in a no mans land
trapped and living life in reverse
trying to hang on
as she comes back once again

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2018-06-17 04:46:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MadMan Waters (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 19th June 2018 @ 03:18:57 PM AEST
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Anguished for sure.
Nice emotional write.

Re: MadMan Waters (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 20th June 2018 @ 04:55:31 PM AEST
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This is very nearly a horror story! A tale of seduction, deceit, and addiction with no end in sight. And you have wrapped it in a love story.

An excellent treatment that many will relate to instantly! You write to, for, and
about the masses, but your personal posture keeps this from sounding like advice! Which, of course, it is!
softerware

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