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Trusting her convictions.
She vowed upon the bible;
To honor all restrictions.

The ceremony followed course;
And all held to their vows;
Before she gave her answer;
She turned to face the crowd.

The ending of this little tale;
Is different for us all;
Some see her ending happily;
Some wait for her to fall.

Where did you place her as you read?
Where was she in YOUR story?
Facing her beloved in church...
Or facing a grand jury! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 108 [topic] => 7 [informant] => softerware [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

THE MINDS EYES

Contributed by softerware on Sunday, 13th May 2018 @ 09:48:34 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

They made a firm commitment;
Trusting her convictions.
She vowed upon the bible;
To honor all restrictions.

The ceremony followed course;
And all held to their vows;
Before she gave her answer;
She turned to face the crowd.

The ending of this little tale;
Is different for us all;
Some see her ending happily;
Some wait for her to fall.

Where did you place her as you read?
Where was she in YOUR story?
Facing her beloved in church...
Or facing a grand jury!

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2018-05-13 09:48:34]
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Re: THE MINDS EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by kdizzy279 on Sunday, 13th May 2018 @ 03:44:01 PM AEST
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I am a Pessimist...good poem, shows the struggle of having to abide by the rules.

Re: THE MINDS EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by Durango on Monday, 14th May 2018 @ 05:14:03 AM AEST
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I/'/m an optimist though depends on the situation. I thought she was in the grand jury of the church!
I was more of a pessimist on this one.
You wrote so careful as to allow the reader to decide. That was fun, hun.

Re: THE MINDS EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 14th May 2018 @ 09:30:21 PM AEST
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Answering logically, I must assume the pessimist position.

Answering as a hopeless romantic, I grab onto the optimist.

So, like the national average on divorce rates, I/'/m around 50/50. lol.

Good poem, and I like in that it forces a question that can aught but reveal a truth in the nature of a persons outlook.

Great job!

Invierno

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