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[sid] => 185110
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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Prayer
[time] => 2018-05-12 21:53:13
[hometext] => For our Dad, who passed away September 2017. We love you.
[bodytext] => You/'/re with me
All my life;
Guiding me
Through grief and strife.
I see you
Through birds and bees;
You/'/re the wind
Blowing through trees.
I feel you
Through pouring rain;
It calms me when
I/'/m full of pain.
I hear you
Through booming thunder;
It shows me a
World of wonder.
The comfort of love
Is warm and true;
I pray that God
Takes care of you.
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My Prayer
Contributed by
Speedy
on
Saturday, 12th May 2018 @ 09:53:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You/'/re with me
All my life;
Guiding me
Through grief and strife.
I see you
Through birds and bees;
You/'/re the wind
Blowing through trees.
I feel you
Through pouring rain;
It calms me when
I/'/m full of pain.
I hear you
Through booming thunder;
It shows me a
World of wonder.
The comfort of love
Is warm and true;
I pray that God
Takes care of you.
Copyright ©
Speedy
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2018-05-12 21:53:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Durango on
Saturday, 12th May 2018 @ 10:13:41 PM AEST (User
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Your pops must have been a man with a tall character. A simple poem to say, hey you/'/re always with me. Nice touch. |
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th May 2018 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST (User
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He is still, your dad
always will be
He sounds like a very good
man, a very genuine
soul.
And so do you.
It/'/s a great prayer,
I think, the best way
to pray.
Speak the truth
If there is a heaven
He/'/s there.
I feel he is someplace
He is with you.
Peace! |
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th May 2018 @ 08:22:19 AM AEST (User
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I am so sorry for your loss.
This is a beautiful // prayer // you have penned. Very pretty.
"In the wind he`s still alive."
Take care. *hugs*
Tim |
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Thursday, 17th May 2018 @ 05:38:34 AM AEST (User
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What a sincere mantra to repeat when you feel lost or alone. This is very sincere and written with affection. His love for you lives in the words you speak of him. You were both very lucky to have one another.
softerware |
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 06:00:33 PM AEST (User
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This was wonderful. Brought a tear to my eyes.
My father left me a few years back and he is in my thoughts every minute of the day. God bless. |
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Re: My Prayer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Harsh on
Thursday, 27th December 2018 @ 06:19:29 AM AEST (User
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Sometimes words fall short describing what we feel.....I know there must be a thousand more things that were left unsaid in this poem....
Bless you...May the time heal you swiftly.. |
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