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at the mercy of the lord
because in this the hardened chammbers of my soul
I know that somewhere on the path
I made a wrong choice

emotional temporal loops are now expanding
now that I am on my own
there is nothing to do
I am bored to death
and I am getting so annoyed

after all the effort I had put into being social
I only have one friend
and he does not really like me
there is no one body here
and I am starting not to care
as I retreat to my alternate reality

I am starting to hate people they mean nothing to me
and I even hate the air they breathe
I am manic and living in depression
and I sit down when I pee

I am quick to frown and always defensive
you better not come at me
but at the same time I am awfully lonely
but thats a secret that I keep

so here at the temple cathedral
I be on my knees
at the mercy of the lord
and says to me
you are losing all cognitive abilities
and it no longer can be Ignored
and he said to me
I know
everything about you.....
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Temple Cathedral

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 12th April 2018 @ 05:57:34 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

well I am on my knees
at the mercy of the lord
because in this the hardened chammbers of my soul
I know that somewhere on the path
I made a wrong choice

emotional temporal loops are now expanding
now that I am on my own
there is nothing to do
I am bored to death
and I am getting so annoyed

after all the effort I had put into being social
I only have one friend
and he does not really like me
there is no one body here
and I am starting not to care
as I retreat to my alternate reality

I am starting to hate people they mean nothing to me
and I even hate the air they breathe
I am manic and living in depression
and I sit down when I pee

I am quick to frown and always defensive
you better not come at me
but at the same time I am awfully lonely
but thats a secret that I keep

so here at the temple cathedral
I be on my knees
at the mercy of the lord
and says to me
you are losing all cognitive abilities
and it no longer can be Ignored
and he said to me
I know
everything about you.....

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2018-04-12 05:57:34]
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Re: Temple Cathedral (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 13th April 2018 @ 09:05:49 PM AEST
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This poem is a not so subtle reminder that WE decide how our life will be; not others.
And you beg the question: What are you waiting for? What is it you want to have?
If it is friendship, anger and frustration can be a great teacher.
If you write down every single thing you can/'/t stand about people,
you will have a list of the things that keep others away.
If you write down everything you like in a person, you will have a a recipe for popularity.
No one owes us anything. And no one controls us.
I really like the storyline. It carries a powerful message that others don/'/t belong to us, and loving who we are becoming is all we can actually control.
softerware

Re: Temple Cathedral (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th April 2018 @ 03:00:46 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
whats up my friend

Re: Temple Cathedral (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Saturday, 14th April 2018 @ 08:10:46 AM AEST
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Well Written!

I have been going through a lot of what you write about. My wife passed 3.5yrs ago and I have struggled with the "Social" aspect of being alone. We were very close and never had others as close friends but when i lost her, i felt i needed to make friends.
I was far too trusting and I now relise that the life we had was not what reality is about. I know now that you can only trust a few people and most will destroy you if they can. That being siad, I refuse to let it interfere with my writting and love of the world.
Hate consumes you and the only one who sufferes from hate is the person hating. I found that out the hard way.
Thankyou for an enjoyable and thought provocing poem.

Re: Temple Cathedral (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 16th April 2018 @ 03:23:22 AM AEST
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I find this a very interesting piece of writing! I like the flux and flow between more poetic ideas and imagery, and very blunt phrases like "I am getting so annoyed" and "I sit down when I pee." there are a lot of contradictions and it definitely comes across that they are difficult to live with. well done.

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