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The Window
Contributed by
Durango
on
Wednesday, 4th April 2018 @ 09:36:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I am the window, I see you,
I see your every mood for free;
I see all the things you do,
And sometimes I see you look at me.
My eyes feel the orbs
Of your varied emotions,
Like the sand absorbs
The undulating oceans.
I can see you when you wake
And saunter to the bathroom,
I can see the steam from the shower you take
And the crowded counter of cosmetics and perfume.
I am the window, I see your night gown,
Tossed upon the bed tangled and twisted;
I see the towel around your hair, it’s brown
And the jasmine lotion with the lid flipped and lifted.
I can see your tongue wet your lips, before you yawn,
I can see the clothes you fold and put away
And the ones you just put on
To start your day.
The shade can be shut
To impede the view,
But when the shade is up
I am the window, I can see you.
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Durango
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Re: The Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Thursday, 5th April 2018 @ 04:56:49 AM AEST (User
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HAUNTING. Your perspective elevates voyerism to a sacrament.
Softly romantic, dancing around the edges of tastefulness and a bit of excitement on the observer/'/s part.
Ladies -- close your shades.
Gentlemen - start your engines.
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Re: The Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 8th April 2018 @ 02:09:34 AM AEST (User
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Crazy good. This reminds me why you should scan a hotel room for cameras. You never know although this is a bit different. Rockwell would have loved this :) |
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Re: The Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th April 2018 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST (User
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creepy,
double spaced
And all
this imagining
this canopy or habitable zone
just now, or at any given time
yet, higher up, the emmergent
sits, this viewpoint, looking down
removed, yet still attached
into the forest it came, out of the forest it went,
when it falls it falls, the earth shakes
filled with sinewy vine, far removed
still closer than plane from above
the fog, the fog and the cloud the cloud not
yet the cloud that could by wind travel
farther still, dropping rain
to rot is natural, one can sit and think
before they might
write about windows that
see inward
I suppose.
I love your stuff Durango, it/'/s truly quite clever.
you are a poet.
Peace!
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